webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Aldrich1966 in The Earth Was Destroyed While I Was Meditating for 5000 Years

Review detail

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966Lv153yrAldrich1966

I could not even get the first chapter read the write was that bad. It make no sense and you can tell the authors first language is not English. if some one can help him out and fix all the problems this book whole be great.

altalt

The Earth Was Destroyed While I Was Meditating for 5000 Years

Maruzensky

Liked it!

LIKE

Replies4

Maruzensky
MaruzenskyAuthorMaruzensky

finally someone who complain about my english language, it's really give me anxiety cause there's no one who complain I'm afraid that my English is really bad that they don't want to read it and as you can see I'm not very good at English but I will still do my best I'm still learning and for the chapter 1 because it's already weekend I will try to fix it, I'm sorry about my bad writing and thank you!

AkiraLight
AkiraLightLv14AkiraLight

Hey Author if you can also fix the synopsis it would help you draw in more readers as your synopsis is also kinda hard to read.

Maruzensky:finally someone who complain about my english language, it's really give me anxiety cause there's no one who complain I'm afraid that my English is really bad that they don't want to read it and as you can see I'm not very good at English but I will still do my best I'm still learning and for the chapter 1 because it's already weekend I will try to fix it, I'm sorry about my bad writing and thank you!
Maruzensky
MaruzenskyAuthorMaruzensky

okay, thank your for your opinion, I will fix it!

AkiraLight:Hey Author if you can also fix the synopsis it would help you draw in more readers as your synopsis is also kinda hard to read.
Nikhil_Chand
Nikhil_ChandLv4Nikhil_Chand

The title has grammatical mistake..... the synopsis has grammatical mistake.... even if the idea is good readers who are decent in english would not visit the book and give it a chance coz this seems to be reading a machine translated version and no1 would want a headache reading not so good english. try to get an editor or proof reader who knows better english

Maruzensky:finally someone who complain about my english language, it's really give me anxiety cause there's no one who complain I'm afraid that my English is really bad that they don't want to read it and as you can see I'm not very good at English but I will still do my best I'm still learning and for the chapter 1 because it's already weekend I will try to fix it, I'm sorry about my bad writing and thank you!