I could not even get the first chapter read the write was that bad. It make no sense and you can tell the authors first language is not English. if some one can help him out and fix all the problems this book whole be great.
Maruzensky
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LIKEfinally someone who complain about my english language, it's really give me anxiety cause there's no one who complain I'm afraid that my English is really bad that they don't want to read it and as you can see I'm not very good at English but I will still do my best I'm still learning and for the chapter 1 because it's already weekend I will try to fix it, I'm sorry about my bad writing and thank you!
Hey Author if you can also fix the synopsis it would help you draw in more readers as your synopsis is also kinda hard to read.
Maruzensky:finally someone who complain about my english language, it's really give me anxiety cause there's no one who complain I'm afraid that my English is really bad that they don't want to read it and as you can see I'm not very good at English but I will still do my best I'm still learning and for the chapter 1 because it's already weekend I will try to fix it, I'm sorry about my bad writing and thank you!
AkiraLight:Hey Author if you can also fix the synopsis it would help you draw in more readers as your synopsis is also kinda hard to read.
The title has grammatical mistake..... the synopsis has grammatical mistake.... even if the idea is good readers who are decent in english would not visit the book and give it a chance coz this seems to be reading a machine translated version and no1 would want a headache reading not so good english. try to get an editor or proof reader who knows better english
Maruzensky:finally someone who complain about my english language, it's really give me anxiety cause there's no one who complain I'm afraid that my English is really bad that they don't want to read it and as you can see I'm not very good at English but I will still do my best I'm still learning and for the chapter 1 because it's already weekend I will try to fix it, I'm sorry about my bad writing and thank you!