while I thinks this books is good so far but there is a big jump in the store from chapter 16 to 17 and I feel like there miss parts of the store that hold info we need

So far this book is a good read but please check your chapter placement you went form a boss fight to repet chapters. This make the store fall flat on it head.

love this book please update as soon as you can ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°°°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

After the little bit I could read this story look to be good but please get some one to edt your chapters. The writhing is all over the place and makes it hard to stay in the flow and understand what they are talking about.

great book. now that it is complete why is there still chapter that we have to pay more to read. All chapters should be open for everyone to read with out have to pay more than the chapters price

As a employee of G4S i thought you should no they have been bought out by Allied Universal

So far this book is really good and should keep getting better if what the intro says. Hope the mc turns out to be like what I and hoping. Just please don't kill of the parents.

I gave this book a low rating because it system talk to much about thing that don't need to be said and it make me think the another is using to just fill a word count.

This is a very good book to read. The MC seems to be a bit OP but that just make it cooler. Hope they keep this book going.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I could not even get the first chapter read the write was that bad. It make no sense and you can tell the authors first language is not English. if some one can help him out and fix all the problems this book whole be great.

this is a repeat of the last chapter

I don't like that you had the MC have his family taken away and the game world is controlled by the wealth and powerful I have drop this book for those reasons.

While I find this book to have a very good store line and like most of the book I find it hard to read do to the writing quality. I think that a good edit and rewrite of this book would push it over the top.

Why I find thus book good I hope that you don't keep using the store lines from other books with only small changes. Other than that it is a good book.

hi

Stay safe and keep writing when you can.

please keep updating this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please keep updating this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please keep updating this book. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!