Review Detail of Charlzie in Immortal Ice Empress: Path to Vengeance
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Great Novel but I came her to read Mira’s story not Maria’s ever since she came on this journey the story start going downhill for me, I don’t care about her character at all because I didn’t click on this novel for this. The synopsis made me read this and it’s completely different. She’s just getting babysitted by our MC…. Great premise but ruined because of the insertion of the typical female MC companion that follows her on her travels. This cliché is even worse than young masters in my opinion. I don’t know why but the moment we first saw her I knew this would happen but I continued reading expecting for a development of the plot instead of making a useless girl one of the main characters of a story. She has no place here… A couple of grammar errors but is still readable, doesn’t bother me. Author please respond to me, will Maria stay as a main character or will we finally focus on Mira? If yes until when should I read?
Immortal Ice Empress: Path to Vengeance
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Well, you aren’t necessarily wrong. Part of the reason I added Maria to the story is I felt like I needed a supporting character as Mira was a bit too emotionless. I felt like the story and dialogue would get boring after a while. But, I do understand where you’re coming from as I haf mistakenly added her in too many chapters. I’m in the midst of rectifying this mistake right now because even though I love Maria, it’s about time for her to leave the scene for a while. As for whether it’s cliche or not, idk. I guess it is a bit cliche, but I also think it’s necessary. Regarding how long you should keep reading it until you get to read about only scenes of Mira. Well, up until the lastest chapter they are still together. However, they are about to separate soon and it’ll just be Mira after that. Thank you for the feedback and I will reflect on this as I am trying to improve not only my writing but the story as well.
i feel you bro, a novel with potential was totally ruined due to her appearance. i dont how i could even get this far. this totally ruined my day. there aren't many that i am frustrated but this is probably one of the top ones. in the future, every time i remember i readed novel, i would surely be frustrated with this again. why did i read?😔
TheFrustratedOne:i feel you bro, a novel with potential was totally ruined due to her appearance. i dont how i could even get this far. this totally ruined my day. there aren't many that i am frustrated but this is probably one of the top ones. in the future, every time i remember i readed novel, i would surely be frustrated with this again. why did i read?😔
