this story is one of my favorite cultivation type novels. it has a really fun vibe while also being able to get dark when it needs to. Story: it's a bit too fast paced for my tastes, but not overly so. you have time to comprehend the previous arc before the next one begins, but there's barely any filler in between. I find it annoying that a lot of novels have pages of filler and take ages to get the story moving again. it also keeps improving and innovating, not just repeating the same ark with different context. the mc is op, but not so much that she has no difficult fights, or that she never dies. this story also illustrates the difficulties of cultivating very well. most story's have the mc gain power with barely any struggle, and this book puts into perspective how hard it actually would be. Character development: The characters are much better than you would expect from a normal novel on this site. they each have separate motives for what they do, and they change over time. there's no static or one dimensional characters. even the antagonist has a bit of depth to him, but since he only shows up rarely, it's barely noticeable. this will probably improve later on though. Grammar: there's about as much mistakes as you would expect a native English speaker to make. It's rare, but typos do happen occasionally, and considering that the mc and her best friend's names are one letter apart, it can make it confusing at times. this barely takes away from the story though, and considering some novels I've seen on here, it's essentially perfect.
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LIKEWhat an in-depth review! I'm a bit embarrassed that you think so highly of my work (hehe) because I understand that there are things that I need to work on. I essentially just write down what I think is right and go from there. Well, it does mean a lot to me to know that you've rated my work with such high praises. It's just me here working on it and I sometimes find it difficult to rate my own work objectively other than knowing that it's something I personally would like. Thanks for reading!
Dreyerboys:What an in-depth review! I'm a bit embarrassed that you think so highly of my work (hehe) because I understand that there are things that I need to work on. I essentially just write down what I think is right and go from there. Well, it does mean a lot to me to know that you've rated my work with such high praises. It's just me here working on it and I sometimes find it difficult to rate my own work objectively other than knowing that it's something I personally would like. Thanks for reading!
Dreyerboys:What an in-depth review! I'm a bit embarrassed that you think so highly of my work (hehe) because I understand that there are things that I need to work on. I essentially just write down what I think is right and go from there. Well, it does mean a lot to me to know that you've rated my work with such high praises. It's just me here working on it and I sometimes find it difficult to rate my own work objectively other than knowing that it's something I personally would like. Thanks for reading!
;) If I want it too heh…. Most likely. However, I can assure you, at the very least, there won’t be any male x female romance.
Ichour:Will you have Yuri?
Dreyerboys:;) If I want it too heh…. Most likely. However, I can assure you, at the very least, there won’t be any male x female romance.
UndeadBeing:Could you put yuri into the tags so I don't have to scroll reviews to find if I have to skip.
I am saying this based on my writer's instincts but it may be for the best to keep the #NOROMANCE tag going. Yuri or straight, sometimes in this type of dark and revenge-based novels, romance may put the story in jeopardy. After all, it's not everyday you get a strong female lead novel that doesn't have romance