Review Detail of Rome_Drori in The Only Leveling System

I can't really tell you my opinion on the story as what threw me off more than anything was the writing quality. From the very beginning you get lines like "I'm tired" the girl said tiredly while brushing her teeth, and the like, lines like these and other issues seem to be present throughout the story. Skipping ahead to around chapter 50, I found that the issues at the start were still there and the author's need to tell not show just oozes throughout, characters will be told they are correct by the author or have things they say or feel justified by the author, in the first chapter the author says people told the mc she could play piano and violin like a professional when she was 5 and then confirms it by stating right after that "and the people who said that were correct, she could indeed play the piano and violin like a professional". I'm surprised and sad nobody pointed these issues out to the author at an earlier point because the description of the novel makes it sound like an interesting read, however even if the novel has emotional moments, or really anything of substance that feels like it would be ruined by the writing quality, and just over explained and stated as a fact to an obscene degree. Something which the author does in a later chapter literally just stating two characters have a deep bond and that also one of them can understand every language. If your able to ignore the huge issues with the writing quality and the borderline, Isekai smartphone, if this than that I tell you writing than this could very well be the novel for you. However as someone who translates novels as a hobby I can tell you that the issue here isn't the authors inability to write a coherent sentence but rather their inability to understand how to pull a reader I to their world, this novel reads like an American 5th or 6th graders first argumentative essay. Take that how you will. TLDR: horrible writing quality issue's, but not log in grammar department, read if you are just really good at connecting to lines like " "I love you" the girl said, and she really meant it her love for the person she said it to held no bounds and they share a deep connection, also she had a love skill allowing her to do the truest of love"