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AzagalPlay
AzagalPlayLv133yrAzagalPlay

If only the mc wasn't a simp, a beta male that is submissive to women, he kills without hesitation every male that wants to kill him, but when it's a woman, he immediatly starts to act like a brainless japanese harem mc that simps on every woman he sees. Also, it was mentioned that he had a perfect compatibility with sunshine but somehow he can't use it during the night like mael, the one who was the perfect vessel for it. that means he got nerfed. There are just too much clichés that I'm skipping paragraphs at this point. The only thing that kept me reading till now is the thanos and jojo references , but even that is getting old so I suppose I'm dropping this in a few chapters.

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Harem System: An Implosion on This Wonderful World

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

It's have friend in a title and comedy as a tag... If that's not a foreshadowing for beta Japanese mc than I don't know what is... Still thank you for review. Because I was iffy about reading it and when I started, it was just disappointing. But it's never was addressed in any other reviews... Wtf is wrong with you, kings?

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

You know its a bad fic when only jojo references are keeping you there.

SoRa
SoRaLv1SoRa

Calla Kevin >:v/

OneeSans_Shota
OneeSans_ShotaLv5OneeSans_Shota

Thanks bro!

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv13TheLonelyGod

I mean it is night and unless he doesn't save Sun Power than he can't use sunshine. Mael wqs always strong as he was one of the 4 Archangels but with Sunshine Grace he was really powerfull. So MC not being able to use sunshine at night is understandable? after all MC ain't an Archangel right?

IKSS16
IKSS16Lv2IKSS16

He's a demigod so I still think he's weakened(Google translator)

TheLonelyGod:I mean it is night and unless he doesn't save Sun Power than he can't use sunshine. Mael wqs always strong as he was one of the 4 Archangels but with Sunshine Grace he was really powerfull. So MC not being able to use sunshine at night is understandable? after all MC ain't an Archangel right?
AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14AshuraMikoto

guys just cam here to say this the authors other story i am not jellal but jellal with a mustache or something is really good bo simping mc even slapped erza when she was being a bish and also did skmething similar to mirajane from when she still wore those got clothes its really good

HeepyterV17
HeepyterV17Lv3HeepyterV17

What about these mc simp? I thought this would be a good story but upon seeing your review... I'm leaving, not worth my time.

Jelly_Red_Kuma
Jelly_Red_KumaLv14Jelly_Red_Kuma

mc is prefect compatibility and vessel it doesnt have or need to do with race his power cannot kill MC and MC is in control even Mael cannot use Sunshine prefectly so it doesnt reason race is issue here

TheLonelyGod:I mean it is night and unless he doesn't save Sun Power than he can't use sunshine. Mael wqs always strong as he was one of the 4 Archangels but with Sunshine Grace he was really powerfull. So MC not being able to use sunshine at night is understandable? after all MC ain't an Archangel right?
InternetDaiii
InternetDaiiiLv4InternetDaiii

Ty for the review, i was trhinking if reading it but i dont think i am going to anymore

Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

It's not his only power and mc can pretty much just one shot anything he comes across anyway, this is a slice of life fic for the most part and mc is VERY op (Dude's pretty much engaged to the Demon Lord's daughter too so even the demon army isn't an issue) and action scenes tend to be just Jojo references, I personally enjoyed the novel until around chapter 100~ Where I ended up dropping it as the Jojo memes ended up becoming too much and the plot progression fell to a grinding halt. (a lot of the simping etc is on purpose in order to capitalise on cliches for parody sake but some of it gets too much, like his siscon tendencies, it's meant to be funny but comes across as cringe af after the first few times)

Jelly_Red_Kuma:mc is prefect compatibility and vessel it doesnt have or need to do with race his power cannot kill MC and MC is in control even Mael cannot use Sunshine prefectly so it doesnt reason race is issue here
InsertaGoodName
InsertaGoodNameLv4InsertaGoodName

are you saying that bec jojo is bad or bec only jojo references kerps him from quitting?

David_Drake:You know its a bad fic when only jojo references are keeping you there.
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Jojo references are a old joke at this point, personally I think their is no place for them in any literature. Though, this story is still good considering it is teeming with these jokes. So, my comment is kind of poking fun of both Jojo and the author's desire to include them. More of a ironic/rhetorical joke if I am to be honest.

InsertaGoodName:are you saying that bec jojo is bad or bec only jojo references kerps him from quitting?
InsertaGoodName
InsertaGoodNameLv4InsertaGoodName

kk

David_Drake:Jojo references are a old joke at this point, personally I think their is no place for them in any literature. Though, this story is still good considering it is teeming with these jokes. So, my comment is kind of poking fun of both Jojo and the author's desire to include them. More of a ironic/rhetorical joke if I am to be honest.
Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv10Ototsu_Yume

As an update I continued the novel again but ended up dropping it again around chapter 225-230, the Jojo memes were reduced as author realised he was doing it too much and the quality improved a great deal, but then it just started becoming even worse by introducing dozens of lolis as 'daughters' for the mc as well as so many other loli wives for him that it becomes beyond disturbing, even when mc starts sleeping with girls (he's still 13 years old as so much goes on in such a small period of time that I'm starting to think no one is ever going to actually grow up) the lolicon vibes are too strong in this novel honestly and far too many people are introduced chapter after chapter that there's most likely more than 50 girls pining for the mc at this point that I do not even know the names of, there's also the cliche of mc having memories of his past life which is great as it's a reincarnation novel, the problems set in when he also starts getting memories of past lives before then as well which starts messing with his personality making him cold and uncaring and starts becoming a cheap ripoff of Adam from Records of Ragnarok.

Ototsu_Yume:It's not his only power and mc can pretty much just one shot anything he comes across anyway, this is a slice of life fic for the most part and mc is VERY op (Dude's pretty much engaged to the Demon Lord's daughter too so even the demon army isn't an issue) and action scenes tend to be just Jojo references, I personally enjoyed the novel until around chapter 100~ Where I ended up dropping it as the Jojo memes ended up becoming too much and the plot progression fell to a grinding halt. (a lot of the simping etc is on purpose in order to capitalise on cliches for parody sake but some of it gets too much, like his siscon tendencies, it's meant to be funny but comes across as cringe af after the first few times)
esperomejorar
esperomejorarLv1esperomejorar

gracias , entonces no la leere

Dark_Crow_Dao
Dark_Crow_DaoLv13Dark_Crow_Dao

Thanks for the warning.

LostLevel
LostLevelLv1LostLevel

so... mc is basically the mitsurugi parody taken seriously? seriosuly? wow... I mean... I thought the parody was clear enough...