Story well reaten and with a fantastic character design, if you read a little of it I'm sure you will amaze yourself. Actually I'm just here to motivate de auctor to continue the stability of updates. Really good job with the fanfic man!!!
Evil_Dragon
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LIKEI can literally see 3 spelling mistakes in your paragraph which as a reviewer, doesn't give me much confidence in you.
Devang98:I can literary see 3 spelling mistake in you paragraph which as a reviewer doesn't gave me much confidence in you .
FBI_B1TCH:I can literally see 3 spelling mistakes in your paragraph which as a reviewer, doesn't give me much confidence in you.
FBI_B1TCH:I can literally see 3 spelling mistakes in your paragraph which as a reviewer, doesn't give me much confidence in you.
FBI_B1TCH:I can literally see 3 spelling mistakes in your paragraph which as a reviewer, doesn't give me much confidence in you.
First its give not gave and it seems that they might speak a different language as they said de auctor so idk
Devang98:I can literary see 3 spelling mistake in you paragraph which as a reviewer doesn't gave me much confidence in you .
Tindrlvs:First its give not gave and it seems that they might speak a different language as they said de auctor so idk
Comma between "which" and "as"; the other comma is correct. Eh, most people don't understand how to use them. Number should be written out, by the way.
FBI_B1TCH:I can literally see 3 spelling mistakes in your paragraph which as a reviewer, doesn't give me much confidence in you.