Review Detail of JGstratego in Death Guns In Another World

Item: Death Guns In Another World
Rating: 2

Review detail

JGstrategoLv122yrJGstratego

The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.

Death Guns In Another World

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Thereader_Lv12Thereader_

I totally agree with you the Gun is very annoying and having an annoying character like that makes reading this a hassle. The MC being chidlish doesn't help either, sometimes he feels like a naofumi iwatani (shield hero)wanna be .

2yr

Cursed_sinLv12Cursed_sin

Fact I dropped cause of his guns I would have yeeted them No need to be op if I had to have an annoying sidekick

Thereader_:I totally agree with you the Gun is very annoying and having an annoying character like that makes reading this a hassle. The MC being chidlish doesn't help either, sometimes he feels like a naofumi iwatani (shield hero)wanna be .

1yr