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interesting seems like some cringe anime

if you want to describe the way she walks and what she's wearing that's fine but all these extra adds nothing

I feel like this description is unnecessary.

I think their both being used and ghost will either kill them or who ever is using them will kill them once their use runs out. I hope that's what happens cos it'll be funnier

so basically ghost is painted as the villain by the actual bad guys who want to twist and rule over the word. people who serve beings and gods from other universes that want to destroy this world or dominate it. I wonder why andreas and selsi have not stopped to think what happens if these people they serve betray them and kill them after using them. I'd also be really funny if the darkness in Andreas was planted by the ghost of the previous timeline. how ever unlikely. Lastly selsi's plan will go well, infact she'll definitely have her clan bigger than the great 8 and unite and control them. what will destroy her plan tho will either be ghost finding out about her and her plans, especially about the second Andreas. Noah and ghost teaming up to kill her or fight together after realising they've both just been manipulated from the beginning to be against each other, or noah no longer wanting to fight ghost . I also think it's funny that Andreas and selsi have plans to control the world while the skyhall celestials have their own plans. who ever Andreas serves has his plans .while the god of time has their plans, as long as their goals don't align I wonder who will come out on top only to be defeated by ghost. (knowing there's a universal threat out there called the queen makes all these fights look like petty squabbles, can't wait for selsi to die so we can focus of the battle of gods)

this chap was shorter than the last 5

I'm sure the skyhall people will come and save him. they can't let him die or.gjost won't kill him. either something or someone stops him or he decides him self not to

ohhh snappppp

I have massive respect for you man. keep doing what you do. this novel and the ones connected to it are amazing. Keep up the amazing work

sunless or sunny?

why each volume so short or is this meant to be a short novel

I hope something happens that turns sol cold. this naive personality isn't cutting it

yes but they break up for reasons you'll find out later

it was short lived

oh God, so his name can be written as just ren, why does this writer do this

if his name can be written as just xiaosu then why bother us by his full name every time instead of just ren

the only thing keeping me reading this is the good reviews, cos for a novel they say is really good this has to be the most boring first 10 chapters I've ever read, I have no idea what's happening even

this reply to my review doesn't tell anyone anything anything, except that you do not know how to read and fully comprehend people's words and that you're a moron who prefers to think they know best when they know and understand nothing.

First off nothing even my earlier review can be taken as me being broke, infact I said the novels release rate is slow and I'd like to stack chapters and you assumed that I I was broke? did it ever occur to you that I may have already read all available chapters including privileged ones? The fact that the release rate is slow really has nothing to do with any of this but you decided to misconstrue my words. There's also the fact that some POVs in the novel are unecessary and that words means(just incase you're dumb enough not to know) that has not important relevance to the plot. for example as their team gets wiped out POVs change and the author changes to a pov of an unknown team member, one that was never mentioned before and will never be mentioned and then an entire paragraph is wasted on it instead of giving more 'screen time' to more important figures. That has nothing to do with giving Jake all the screen time or me wanting to see only Jake, Once again you misconstrue my words. Finally allowing the MC and his friends shine amongst their peers like I rightfully said has nothing to do with them being overpowered or unbeatable infact as of right now Jake is pretty overpowered him self and he has team mates that are also pretty OP, my point was the time between his power ups and beat downs were mostly too short not giving him enough time to get used to his new powers. That is not a bad review that is simply stating what happened in the novel and giving a constructive criticism. nothing I said in my review was false about the novel nor was I shit talking, I infact gave the novel the rating it deserves because this novel is just that good. I believe you might actually be a moron but I will give you the benefit of doubt.