This chapter doesn't seem that bad until I remember that they're both still kids...so this is kinda f**ked...like bruh

Yep, considering how Selena tricked Lux before but it was barely glossed over after the fact, I still really don't like Selena.Bella's not my favorite either, always feels full of herself and treating Lux like a child despite the fact that he's supposedly the most respected figure on Earth.Definitely not my favorite pair, I can tolerate Bella but I'd sock Selena in the face if I could.

Cannot understand a thing, the grammar is horrid. The idea sounded interesting but it was just too difficult to understand a majority of the text to the point that the meaning behind it was lost.

The concept for this story is cool but the execution just wasn't there sadly. It started out fine which minor errors in grammar but negligible. Unfortunately the relationships weren't fleshed out at all and felt forced from the start. Also the idea that the MC's gun has a mildly infuriating personality while having access to his inner thoughts irked me to no small degree. I just wish the relationships were done a little better.

I like this story originally but then the author told us that the MC was a complete a-hole of a bf and did nothing to properly explain why. He just was... Not to mention the development between him and the girls became more and more absurd, they just suddenly would do something stupid to progress the plot in accordance to the author's vision. They were literally pushing the MC into other girl's arms while acting jealous like it wasn't their own fault... I just had enough of it at one point, it makes me sad to see a story with such potential deteriorate like this.