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Overall, I really like this currently. My real review would be less than three stars, but since story has been really good for a long time I'm going to give it four to boost ratings. Let me explain. Story is actually well written, mc isn't some edgy revenge lord, nor he is total saint. He's quite reasonable. Also various stories, especially core marvel stuff is really interesting. BUT story has at least two unbearably long stretches where basically nothing happens, mc just does one minor case/fanfic plotline that are not connected in any way to anything, and mc doesn't even get levels. There were basically two 200+ chapter stretches where mc didn't level up, there was nothing about progression of mc's company or mention of core storyline (marvel). I was almost going to quit. Now, I wouldn't actually recommend this story, I'm just saying for last ~500 recent chapters story has been really good. Since it has progression and while side quests always happen, core marvel stuff and progression of mc's company and organization is happening. I like it NOW, but you just can't have massive stretches of time where essentially nothing happens. Overall, if you are bored and have time, have a go, if you manage to not drop it, it will become really good story. Otherwise don't bother.

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Super Detective in the Fictional World

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I disagree with you. I have stuck around for more than 1600 chapters, and that stretch of time where the MC deals with minor cases IS important to the plot of the story. During this time the MC learns more about the system, as well as how to deal with various events. Most of the little fanfic plotline that you mention actually can lead to a separate plotline that is really important to the story. For example, in the Taken fanfic plotline, the MC meets Elena. She is a French chick, who is given realtively little time, but later in the story, around 1400 or later, her precense starts to skyrocket. In the Friday the 13th mini plotline, the MC learns first hand on how to deal with enemies that have supernatural abilities, as well as his inability to recieve their powers. Plus he also makes connections with certain miliatry figures, as well as solves a separate case that also leads to another mini-plotline, which then leads to a major plotlline that effects the story even til past chapter 1600. So far, every part of this story that I have read does not bring up a plot point only to throw it away a second later. There are some characters that may show up for a second, only to be brought back later and helping, or hindering, the MC. My biggest issue with the story would be that it took about 1000 chapters for the MC to only go through the first year of being a detective.