Review Detail of John_Jiggler in Leveling through Lust

Item: Leveling through Lust
Rating: 5

Review detail

John_JigglerLv22yrJohn_Jiggler

Amazing work. Flawless grammar. You got a way with words that make your works interesting to read. Word of advice- Make a cover for the book. You can even take it from a Google search. But keep it sexy.

Leveling through Lust

Dirk_Grey

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Krozam_00Lv4Krozam_00

You need to work on your grammar if you think this has "flawless grammar." There are missing question marks, missing articles, incorrect word orders etc. It's not too bad overall, but it's a far cry from perfect.

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