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Krozam_0024dCommentedHonestly, it's a shame the story doesn't give much spotlight to his children. As it is, their existence in the story is paper thin and meaningless.
In the following days, he took advantage of the time when he was having sex with his wife and Dao Companions to preserve their blood essence and divine sense in the Soul Heavenly Pearl. As for his children, he had no choice but to think about it in the future.- Krozam_0024dCommented
Why would it disappear? It should become even clearer.
Moreover, he had a feeling that after this palace, the difference between the top 10,000 and the Beast Spirit geniuses after 10,000 would probably completely disappear. - Krozam_0024dCommented
More than three metres tall? Is he still a human?
Immortal Venerable Bing, who was more than three meters tall, smiled and said, "Looks like Shen Ping is still very sensible. The other Immortal Venerables laughed. Lin Yu, Hui Chang, and the other eight Immortal Beast Spirit geniuses also smiled. They were still very curious about Shen Ping, but because of this environment, they could not say anything. - Krozam_0024dCommented
Lol. As if her low grade charms would work on him.
"There are too few opportunities. Every time I meet that human Beast Spirit genius, my clan sister will always disturb me. Hmph, she's afraid that I'll seduce her sweetheart." Yin Yan clenched her fists and said, "Don't worry, Master. I'll definitely succeed." - Krozam_0026dCommented
The author really needs to learn some different ways to express a time skip. This "in the blink of an eye" is awfully repetitive.
In the blink of an eye, a hundred years passed. - Krozam_0027dReplied to CastlePanda
At a glance, I like your story premise, but the fact that you have at least three errors in your synopsis doesn't exactly inspire confidence in the quality of your writing. I'd recommend getting an editor/proofreader. "banned" -> banded "too small a thing, to stop him" -> remove the comma "fair" -> fare
- Krozam_0030dCommented
Nice twist. I admit I didn't see that coming.
Seeing the girl kneeling on the ground, Chen Xiao's sister raised her head, looking cold and stern, with none of the softness of a weak sister. - Krozam_002mthCommented
He did buy it with spirit stones, though...
She didn't ask the price. But it must be a rare treasure to be able to eradicate the troublesome Black-striped Venomous Worm. Such an item could not be bought with spirit stones. - Krozam_003mthReplied to AuthoriTet
- Krozam_003mthReplied to Magecrafter
What exactly do you mean by "candidates?" Do you mean there are several female characters who fall for the MC, but he only chooses one, or that there are several otherwise central female characters, but only one of them is eventually chosen as the love interest? Because I generally hate it when likable female characters get their hearts broken. If it's got a harem, it should also have a harem end, is what I always say, though it's not like there aren't exceptions that I've enjoyed.
- Krozam_004mthReplied to AlexisCain
Because he can't. What he's doing isn't cultivation, immortality is quite literally GIFTED to him.
Lu Changsheng spread his hands and said, "I can't even cultivate immortality myself. Why should I delay others? Besides, it's so tiring to teach disciples. I'm having fun alone. Why should I suffer?"detailI See the Aura of the Great Emperor in All My DisciplesEastern · Don't Let Me Stay Up All Night - Krozam_004mthReplied to Zentmeister
What kind of a world is this story set? When I see the word "manga," I kinda automatically assume it's either in Japan or a fantasy world, as manga set in foreign countries with mainly foreigner cast are very rare outside of the fantasy/scifi genres. However, judging from the names, the MC is not Japanese and most of the cast actually seems to be Korean, so I'm a bit confused...
- Krozam_004mthCommented
This is pretty good so far. Unfortunately, the translation quality drops sharply after this chapter, they're basically just taking MTL and not bothering to even edit it. You can find the rest of the novel for free elsewhere, just google it. No need to feel guilty - since they can't be bothered to do any real work to provide proper translations, there's no need for us to pay them to unlock the chapters.
Ch 40 Why Hasn’t the Assassin Come? - Krozam_004mthCommented
In fact, he couldn't have given chase even if he wanted to. He should learn a movement technique next.
'He did not even bother to give chase, as the rebounded energy would kill me. - Krozam_004mthCommented
Even the bones?
Li Chu immersed himself in the soup, which was made of many edible ingredients, such as chestnut, yam, and pork bones. In line with his practice of reducing food waste, Li Chu fished out all the ingredients and ate them all. - Krozam_004mthCommented
*Why don't we
"Where else can we hide? Are we not hiding far enough? There will be other cultivators elsewhere. It is just a Daoist priest. Why not we just kill him? We put too much hope on our king. Where are we going to find so many Lifesilvers? Before that, maybe we would have been wiped off one by one by one," said the ghost called Heiya on the west side. - Krozam_004mthCommented
*I bumped
"I bump into a Daoist priest! Ahhhhhh—" - Krozam_004mthCommented
They have female construction workers?
In his view, the workers became human forms of red and blue. This should be the Yin and Yang Qi in the human body. The red-dominated person was full of Yang Qi, and the blue-dominated person was full of Yin Qi. Apart from the red and blue Qi, there would occasionally be a faint black Qi drifting past, which should be their emotions. - Krozam_004mthCommented
If it's just an ordinary sword, maybe it's at a breaking point due to being unable to bear his sword qi.
Was it because he had overstressed it?