Review Detail of HolyJoker in Naruto: Dream to Immortality (COMPLETED)

Goodluck m8

Harem?

Patience is a virtue my friend. But we aren't very virtuous people if we want a harem are we. *wink**wink* ( If you didn't get it I said we.)

If I do write a harem it will be realistic. What I mean by that you will understand when Canon timeline comes around.

May I just say your cover image of the book always makes me think he says saying "IT WAS ME DIODA!!!"

Herem? Op mc? Weak to strong? Strong mc? Strong from the start??

Harém is life 😍😍

Warning NTR

Warning NTR

What are you talking about.???

There is no NTR in this book🤨. I hate NTR and am not planning to have any in here. If you are a spammer please stop I don't appreciate this. 😑😑 I am very tired in real life currently and don't have time to get into this.

He let minato claim the one who save kushina even though you have build mc's story and kushina for so long before that, i waste so many times here

Ehhh the MC just got close to Kushina to learn Fuinjutsu not to love her or something like that. MC isn't into little girls. I mean if the MC wants to fùck something he will get someone like Tsunade not a little kid. The MC is a grown up in a kids body he isn't gonna have a crush on Kushina like a kid. Romance is a little more complicated than that for adùlts. And the MC isn't someone who would go after Kushina just to get his winer wet. That would ruin a lot of his plans that he has for the future. Also your book also had a super good beginning but then later it just became mah. I guess we just have different tastes in MC. 😁😁😁 (I actually really liked your book in the beginning.)

It's just that it leaves a bad aftertaste, that taste is something the same i get after reading another ntr story. This is just a warning for future reader. Thanks if you like my story even at the beginning, but this is true.

Nothing's really f***ed up if he accept kushina's feeling and not doing something stupid like become a cupid for some random dude

It's not like he put them together. He just doesn't care for Kushina or Minato. He has a more important goal currently and that trying to stay alive.

This is the reason why gold diggers exist, most men just fall in love to easily and are ready to give it all for a woman. And Kushina at most she might of have had for the MC is a crush. That doesn't mean that she will love him unconditionally even if he has a harem. That is not how things work. Even if most fanfics make it that the woman accepts that. True in a world where absolute power exists, there is a way for a person to have a harem. And that way is absolute power and if the girls know that they will die horribly if they do something stupid. Love isn't an all powerful tool to create a harem that just isn't realistic. I have always tried in my book to make people realistic and not with just cardboard personalities.

Also it isn't like Kushina and him were together or something like that. It's like a woman that you knew in high school got married. You wouldn't feel like you got ntr just because you used to tell her good morning when you saw her at school.

He can just go save her himself without telling it to minato. It's so fu**ing stupid. Kushina is just like that, she will love only that person who save her no matter what happen as you had already told in your story that kushina already has a feeling for mc even though not that much in the beginning.

It doesn't answer the real question, he can still be alive if he accept her.