Review Detail of Unchainedx in The Last Child of Darkness: The Winter Night

You write very well, the original idea is interesting, but the plot is not well done, the protagonist is not interesting and the relationships are superficial, I feel that you do not know very well the path you will take, I feel that the strength and the MC's personalities are shaped for him to be part of percy jackson's "adventures", there were no character development chapters or training for him to be what he is today, it is as if he did'nt exist before percy entered the camp. The idea of ​​him being a god is interesting, but it is not well explored / developed, as I said before: He is being limited to be part of the "adventures of percy jackson", it is as if he was sleeping for 14 years and just woke up now, only now he will develop: as a person and as a god. I didn't quite understand who the love interest will be, in the first chapters the protagonist seemed very close to Annabeth, but apparently she has feelings for Luke ... I don't know if you are obeying readers' ideas, but what I say is: The novel is yours, do what you want, don't do what some readers want, honestly this part bothered me a lot. I wish the best for the novel, bye.