Review Detail of despacitoh in Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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This novel started as gem for me, really good fanfic and actually the first good danmachi fanfic tbh, the story is really good, the fight scene and progress is smooth, and author really have a great mind to make viewer heart goes roller coaster UNTIL 140++ chap where the romance start, dont get me wrong i love harem, but too much is gonna ruin the story for sure, atleast for me, suddenly the mc became s*x craze, and mostly he do is f**k, find new chick, lil bit progress, f**k again and repeat, tried to endure it till now, i give up this gem , its kinda sad to part ways, but cant stand it anymore, i wish your next work is great at this but more to development and story than harem hunting
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Einlion
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Well i made a mistake about wording phase, what i mean is (from my point of view) is theres a 90% chance when vahn meet new girls either they became depend or entering his harem league, theres nothing wrong with that it just a matter of preference and i told you earlier right i love your works and respect your dedication, but the story is not up to my prefernce, maybe its my fault since i have different perspective and expectation, and i do forget its not my story but yours, well let me update my review ad fix my faulty word later
Einlion:This is blatantly false. Over the course of a five-month period, of actual story development, Vahn has been depicted as having *** a total of eight times. People WITHOUT a harem literally have more *** than that. And, if you'd like, show me a single girl Vahn has 'hunted' down.
It's all good, thanks for reading :3 And about the harem issues, its a combination of Vahn's disposition, looks, situation, and the unfortunate world choice xD. Things are a lot less focused on the actual 'harem' later in the story, and it isn't even a focus at all in later records since Vahn would have no reason to be seeking out a bunch of girls. Maybe I'll see you again in the future, take care~!
despacitoh:Well i made a mistake about wording phase, what i mean is (from my point of view) is theres a 90% chance when vahn meet new girls either they became depend or entering his harem league, theres nothing wrong with that it just a matter of preference and i told you earlier right i love your works and respect your dedication, but the story is not up to my prefernce, maybe its my fault since i have different perspective and expectation, and i do forget its not my story but yours, well let me update my review ad fix my faulty word later
Einlion:It's all good, thanks for reading :3 And about the harem issues, its a combination of Vahn's disposition, looks, situation, and the unfortunate world choice xD. Things are a lot less focused on the actual 'harem' later in the story, and it isn't even a focus at all in later records since Vahn would have no reason to be seeking out a bunch of girls. Maybe I'll see you again in the future, take care~!
I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is easy to have a HIGH review rate when you delete anything that isn't 5 stars. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.
SorcererCat:I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is easy to have a HIGH review rate when you delete anything that isn't 5 stars. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.
yep. review deleting all right. If you look at the later pages, you'll find multiple reviews from one account spamming 5 stars with "review" "exp" or even just a string of dots. On the other hand, reviews lower than 4 stars are almost nonexistent. you'll have to go through multiple pages to find one and even then, it'll probably be removed after some time.
SorcererCat:I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is easy to have a HIGH review rate when you delete anything that isn't 5 stars. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.
Well I got a fever + got butthurted by Freya situation and ranted a little in review and despite it being a little harsh it wasn't that bad of review, not to the point just to delete it.. quite a ridiculous system if you thought about it if I knew that author can just delete whatever he want I would't be bothered to type.. Too lazy to write it all over again so I'll explain only my 'main complaint' point in case someone will see it. SPOILER ALERT. Freya netorare (from perspective) - so Vahn knew she would be his wife and mother of his child yet he still proceeded with casually helping her get knocked up by Ottar and was like 'hmm someone's else semen in her abdomen.. nice' whatever I would prefer netorare tag for the novel + explanation of the situation for those who bothered by 'ntr'. Also author reaction at criticism.. well to be honest I haven't seen any author on webnovel taking criticism in a good/worthily way.. Sad. Maybe they should make some short guide about this or something.. Also this is why the less you know about the author the better (universal advice for any book) P.S. Also.. sorry for spam..
Want proper review? check EPIC in Royalroad website. the reviews are things i completely agree with. got tired with this novel after reading 540+ chapters. it was a good ride but im still tired with this novel after 2-3 months passed. still in my library but ill read it again when theres nothing to read anymore.
Pyoug:wait, srsly? mc got ntr? and he did nothing? I mean did she sleep with Ottar while she was in his harem/or had sex?
Pyoug:wait, srsly? mc got ntr? and he did nothing? I mean did she sleep with Ottar while she was in his harem/or had sex?
Pyoug:wait, srsly? mc got ntr? and he did nothing? I mean did she sleep with Ottar while she was in his harem/or had sex?