i agree for the first point. as for the magic system? it depends on which one he chooses. in dxd human magic system is far more complicated. but for the devils, its based off imagination. for harry potter, the spell casting system is wand movements, and spell name. though i see silent and wandless casting in a lot of fanfics. i think the only really hard part of the harry potter system is learning all the other things, such as runes, arithmancy, alchemy and potions. if you wanted to be an inventor of magic and magical items i think these would be the most complicated ones

i agree. midoriya first year is when nejire is in 3rd year. so cannon can't possibly have started yet simply because nejire is in our main character's middle school meaning she should be in the final year of middle school at best right now. it was also stated out MC was 14 or 15 years old so he too should be in the final year so he wouldn't be in 2nd year but 3rd.

bad idea. the crazy rabbit is her sister. avoid at all costs. AVOID

this torture and self reflection arc is quite dragged out. I get that the author is trying to do some character building through this but at the same time, its being mentioned in multiple chapters with the MC using different methods and that gets a bit old.

agreed. twice not only copies himself, but also others, replicating their quirks as well. and he can do it infinitely making him such a huge threat. the drawbacks is only the mental instability that had the copies wanting to kill the original since they are the "real one"

eh. debatable. if i recall, mineta gets pretty fast when bouncing off his balls (quirk) but otherwise, his short stature makes higher numbers here unfitting.

you can find dark phoenix of konoha by white angel of auralon on the site fanfiction.net. the original author stopped updating awhile ago but never outright stated that they were dropping the story. It was also never mentioned if someone else is picking the story up. given that the same story is published on webnovel under a different author and book name without any clarifications I highly suspect the work is plagiarized. Even worse is that "doppins" is also promoting his patreon page at the end of chapters to "read ahead" despite the chaapters not being original.

this was a reply to someone who asked awhile ago if this was an original work. that question seemed to have been deleted though.

its not. you can read "dark phoenix of konoha" by white angel of auralon on fanfiction.net. the original author seems to have stopped updating the fanfic but has not stated whether they are completely dropping it. They also never mentioned if someone else is picking up the work. Unless "Doppins" is the original author using a different name for this site, or that they had permission from the original author to upload the work here, it is clearly plagiarism.

wouldnt it also look weird having to clean sliced up leaves from the floor?

which isn't wrong*

however, this paragraph did say earth based defenses. which isnt since earth does ground lightning...

uh no. its still wrong. earth is vulnerable to lightning. but here it is worded as if lightning is vulnerable to earth. fire beats wind. wind beats lightning, lightning beats earth, earth beats water, and water beats fire. thats how it went according to naruto

I had high expectations early on with this story but i am not impressed. its not bad but it also didn't meet expectations. spoilers ahead. skip it if you dont want spoilers. the female lead went back on her plans so quick. at first the plan was to let everyone else die and she lives her life on a ranch she buys but then she is out trying to save people. while helping people isnt bad, most of the people she meets, namely the military generals are very stubborn and ignorant and acts in a way that i feel doesnt deserve her help. Yet she still follows along with their commands to a certain point and assists them when s he isn't obligated to do so. the military generals also dont have the power to force her either but she always seem to give in to it, because her male lovers seem to agree. perhaps the author is trying to get character development for the female lead but it is simply done in a way that doesn't quite fit her character given the way she acts and is described, which makes it feel very forced.

not sure but i believe grindelwald was a pure blood dark lord? bellatrix lestrange was voldie's most fanatic and strong follower augustus rookwood (a death eater) worked for the unspeakables amelia bones is head of dmle though we never quite saw if she was actually magically powerful. alastor moody is considered one of the most powerful aurors. james potter and sirius black became animagus at a young age. not sure if there were any other notable ones.

Welll written story.... that is a word for word copy of "Dark Phoenix of Konoha" written by White Angel of Auralon on Fanfiction.net. The work hasn't been updated in over 5 years but the author also never stated if the work was dropped. Unless this is the same author with a different pen name, or that this author has permission to continue the story from the original author, this is clearly plagiarism. This copy on webnovel also does not state whether they were the original author, or that they had permission to use/continue the work.

true. he also knows how to learn the rasengan as well as the method to train a wind affinity

grandfather and yukino* since miyuki is the criminal

nevermind, found out later this chapter...

when did he get a vaporeon? or an eevee and water stone? i dont remember reading about this