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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen15d
    Commented

    I call buildout on this G

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    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen16d
    Commented

    I like how Sirzechs seems to be a ccol one in this fanfic. To many people toss 💩 in his direction in their fanfics.

    'You heard me. Add her to your harem or whatever. Do it for your brother.' 
    The Knight of Ruin(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen16d
    Commented

    Yea, this has become boring and directionless. You are nerding out so much on JJK skills and techniques along with an MC with a psycho personality that the Danmachi setting has become bland uninteresting.

    Ch 10 First time in the dungeon
    In Danmachi with A Jujutsu Kaisen System
    Anime & Comics · Zekt
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen17d
    Commented

    This guy is a chump. He is about to be relegated to beta anime MC status.

    Ch 42 Having a steamy night {R18}
    Level up: SSS Class Hunter
    Fantasy · Chaos_to_all
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen17d
    Commented

    Eww, voice activated powers are trash.

    "Yeah, I can see that." Kim stretched his hand to the side, "Come forth, become my blade once more…. Escanor!".
    Level up: SSS Class Hunter
    Fantasy · Chaos_to_all
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen17d
    Commented

    I dont know why he was screaming against goblins? Ifhe was a hunter he shiuld have had some combat training even if his skill was trash. If he became a hunter and could not fight at all he is incompetent and so is whatever entity gave him the license. This guy doesn’t even carry weapons on him. Utterly deplorable.

    "Never again…. I'll never feel helpless again!!!".
    Level up: SSS Class Hunter
    Fantasy · Chaos_to_all
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen17d
    Commented

    Maybe the author should kill this guy off. Who makes an MC this pathetic?

    'Helix… please tell me you have a way for me to get out of this alive.' Kim whispered in his mouth as he reached inside his bag.
    Level up: SSS Class Hunter
    Fantasy · Chaos_to_all
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen17d
    Commented

    What a pathetic MC.

    After a couple of minutes, Kim was lying on the ground, panting heavily after he had just finished doing 10 sit ups and push ups.
    Level up: SSS Class Hunter
    Fantasy · Chaos_to_all
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen19d
    Replied to HikaruMC

    You should probably make an actual synopsis to the story

    Naruto: Different Story
    Anime & Comics · HikaruMC
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen19d
    Replied to Dame_ningen1

    It*

    Ch 1 Prologue
    One Piece: Against the Gods
    Anime & Comics · B00BIES_for_life
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen19d
    Commented

    If sucks that he doesn’t know he is in one piece. All the corrections he could have made.

    Ch 1 Prologue
    One Piece: Against the Gods
    Anime & Comics · B00BIES_for_life
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen110d
    Posted

    Can we get a real damn synopsis? You have not explained the story at all

    Danmachi: Sirius Felln
    Anime & Comics · Kain101
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen114d
    Commented

    The attempts at comedy with the system is cringe to me at least.

    Ch 2 Kakashi Hatake and the bell test
    Reincarnated as Naruto in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · LuciferTheDevil767
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen114d
    Commented

    If the baby come born with braids I aint the pa!

    Birth control pills.
    Surviving in HOTD
    Anime & Comics · Tonkotsu
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen115d
    Commented

    This is turning out to be poorly thought out.

    "Now. You guys are from the Orphan class and barely passed the Academy test. Right now you will have to go through 1 more test from me to see if you're fit to become my genin or go to the genin corps."
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen115d
    Commented

    I am starting to ask myself if I should read any further?

    "I would like to be a part of the Nara clan." I said.
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen115d
    Commented

    Terrible logic. Just say you don’t wanna be cliche and pick the overpowered bloodlines

    And thus any decent bloodline like the Uchiha, Uzamaki or Senju is off limits, unless I wanted a massive target on my back.
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen116d
    Commented

    If he is throwing stuff around the room he is already having a breakdown.

    Naruto felt he was on the verge of an emotional breakdown. He wanted to believe that his life had meaning and that he had control over his own destiny. But now, everything seemed so uncertain.
    Naruto: The Hunting Dimension
    Anime & Comics · Smith_10
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen123d
    Commented

    Akeno does not use holy lightning because she hates her father. She does not use holy lightning until the underworld training arc.

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    Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System
    Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
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  • Dame_ningen1
    Dame_ningen129d
    Commented

    Uniform *

    While Issei was listening to the two bickering dragons he was getting ready for school. He got changed into his school which consisted of a black blazer over a white dress shirt with his favorite white shirt with black stripes.
    DxD: I Got Saved by Ophis
    Anime & Comics · cakemonster
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