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For one most definitely take your rest when needed, for two honestly the story is flowing well I think someone mentioned it already but his small army always going up against a huge army seems a little unfair to his people no, atleast for a lord who cares, I know he needs to make money but building stronger army units under the different species he has under him should be priority as well as another round of fortress/land development.
A flow of both is necessary, you are doing perfect, the character isn’t progressing too fast like 99% of novels on here, it’s not the same cliché storylines that have been repeated several times, you not only build the character but the characters and the world around him which makes for a super immersive story. It’s very rare that I find a novel I enjoy on here especially with your release rate overall I would rate this novel 9.5 out of 10 the .5 is for my ruined sleep schedule waiting up to read an extra chapter 😂😂😂
I would be wrong to say this is a bad novel like the authors other novel they are all exceptional pieces of work with one flaw he constantly drops repeats which we end up wasting coins on and we don’t get reembursed no extra chapters he doesn’t even give an explanation as to why it’s happening… so while I would love to give him 5 stars he’s gone weeks sometimes months without dropping just to drop a bunch of repeat chapters and in that case I would rate it 1star if the story lines weren’t up to par
This is starting to become disrespectful we pay real money to read your chapters and you don’t even have the decency to make sure you’re not posting duplicates if its not your fault you need to take it up with the app but this is starting to get irritating
He needs to put out atleast a notice of whats going on thats the issue, there has been no notes on his update schedule or any of that people are paying a lot of money monthly just to reas his book a aimple update on whats going on isnt too much to ask for
I’m about 80% sure their offspring is Richard eno, and Quinn’s is probably a descendant of his or his family was part of his group and was told to hold the book, I also wouldn’t be surprised if he’s (Richard) the one who created the dalkis trying to find another solution to blood, the fact that the dalkis have similar technology would lead me to believe either he was kidnapped and forced to make new technology for them or something bad happened and he joined the dalkis