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Jane_austen6dCommentedI can't believe him-
As Cynthia walked away, Tian's gaze lingered on her retreating figure, a mix of protectiveness and concern settling in his chest. Pulling out his phone, he quickly opened the chat where he had hurriedly sent a message to one of his friends, noting down the bike's license plate number that had nearly caused an accident that morning.- Jane_austen6dCommentedTian nodded, his smile widening. "Yeah, your emotional intelligence is high, but your IQ..." he trailed off, shrugging playfully. Nia grabbed a fork and jokingly pointed it at him, causing him to lean back with a laugh. "As her best friend, I rescind my approval," she mockingly declared.
- Jane_austen6dCommented
Nia is truly extraordinary and wonderfully exceptional in every possible way.
This brought a chuckle out of his lips, his eyes closing for a moment as his chest rumbled with his laugh. His eyes came in contact with those lovable hazel ones and that's when he realized that he had just laughed out loud while sitting in the class. Glancing at Cynthia, who looked back at him with questioning eyes and a hint of a smile, then at Nia, who stared at him as if she had just seen a clown, and at another classmate behind him who frowned at him, he thought, 'Well, this is awkward.' - Jane_austen6dCommented'I think,' he thought to himself, tilting his head back slightly to steal another glance at Cynthia, 'I really like you, Cynthia—more than I realized.'
- Jane_austen6dCommentedAs Tian gazed at Cynthia's side profile, the gentle sunlight streaming through the window lent a softness to her features as she concentrated on the teacher. His eyes then wandered to the view outside, where the Ferris wheel stood tall, its lights reflecting off the nearby water. A smile played on his lips as he took in the scene.
- Jane_austen6dCommentedCh 23 A little brighter, a little better
- Jane_austen11dCommented"This is insane," he whispered to himself. "How can one hug mess me up this much?"
- Jane_austen12dCommentedI was so excited that we won, that I just threw my arms around Tian and hugged him so tight! Heh, sounds easy but god, the way my life has almost flashed in front of my eyes after that was hilarious. But then I did try to convince myself that it's normal between friends, no? But then again, is he only a friend to me? The answer is an obvious no.
- Jane_austen12dCommented
Bet she can feel every moment while writing in her diary.
Then Nia showed up, all bubbly and full of energy as usual. She gave me a big hug and asked if I was okay, which made me feel so loved. We all piled into Ryan's car, and the drive to the arcade was filled with laughter and jokes. Ryan took this crazy sharp turn, and I ended up falling right into Tian's arms! Oh my gosh, it was so embarrassing and thrilling at the same time! Our faces were so close, and I could feel his breath on my skin. My heart was racing so fast I thought it might burst! - Jane_austen13dCommented
Butterflies guaranteed.
Their faces were just inches apart, and for a moment, they were both acutely aware of each other. The air was thick with an unspoken connection, and Tian could feel his heart pounding in his chest. - Jane_austen13dCommented
Calm down, Jane!!
Cynthia, caught off guard, fell right against Tian. His instincts kicked in and, his hand gripped her wrist while his other hand supported her back. - Jane_austen14dCommented
With Tian, it surely is different 🫠
Her heart fluttered as Tian drew nearer, his smile growing wider. It was a feeling she had fought against for so long, afraid to let herself hope, to let herself feel. But with Tian, it was different. He had a way of making her feel safe, cherished, and important. - Jane_austen14dCommented
This paragraph hold such warm true emotions✨️
As he approached, Cynthia felt a warmth spread through her, a sensation she had rarely allowed herself to indulge in. Tian was an unexpected change in her life, a bright spot against the shadows of her past. His presence had a way of dimming the scars left by her tumultuous childhood, soothing the hurt with his kindness and unwavering support. - Jane_austen14dCommented
You can just feel the pain just by reading this. Cynthia surely is a very tough girl🤍
She had witnessed the look of affection in her mother's eyes turn into painful indifference. The love and pride in her father's eyes had vanished, replaced by a constant look of shame whenever he looked at her. - Jane_austen16dPosted
I am completely captivated by this novel! From the very first page, I was drawn into a beautifully crafted world filled with rich, vibrant characters and an intricately woven plot. The author's storytelling is nothing sort of masterful, balancing moments of profound emotion with breathtaking suspense. Each chapter unfolded with such elegance and depth, making it impossible to put down. The way the themes of love, resilience and transformation were explored between Tian and Cynthia was so smooth and hence leaving a lasting impact on me. This novel, being a very first novel of yours, is nothing but a TRUE GEM for me and I am grateful for the journey it took on me. Thank you for creating a beautiful and transformative piece of literature. I can't wait to read more of your work in the future and seeing you shining brightly above there in the world of Novelists. 🤍🤍✨️✨️ Lastly, I Love You and Your Work and I wish you all my luck possible to see you so successful and best in your life. This novel is so close to me and I hope that one day everyone will be sharing the same thoughts as me. 🧿🪄❤️
- Jane_austen16dCommented
I am deeply impressed and genuinely moved by the way you seamlessly intertwined the contrasting dark and light phases of her life. Your ability to highlight her struggles alongside her triumphs, revealing the resilience and strength she embodies, is nothing short of inspiring. Your narrative not only brings her personal experiences to life but also serves as a powerful testament to the human spirit's capacity for growth and transformation. It's truly awe-inspiring to witness such a profound connection between the hardships she faced and the victories she achieved. You have a remarkable gift for storytelling that encourages others to find hope and meaning in their own journeys.[img=recommend]
Ch 18 Suspended between hope and fear