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a bit confusing after reading the synopsis, his name is namor but he bends fire,tbh i thought he was atlantean or something,and as for the zuko scene and the conversation with iroh it was a bit...well let's just say you still have a lot of room to grow.I can't decide yet how wrote a review for this novel. But nice chap btw, I hope you're healthy
Actually I don't really have a problem with the slow pacing of the story, and I understand that this story is starting from zero, but for some reason the MC seems like he doesn't have any special skills unlike the other Food Wars characters and with his convoluted internal monologue it kind of makes me sleepy at times. reading, I hope you improve the quality of your writing, btw I hope you are healthy and can continue to develop.