Also don't worry there is no system and I hate harems so no harem, romance unknown yet.

Hello I wished to ask if you can check the rewritten chapter 1 as I took you're suggestions on improving my style of writing and wished to know if I did it correct.

I changed the format of chapter one and rewrote a few things in it I plan on keeping that style of writing and wanted to ask you if it's better I plan to rewrite that same way all the chapters today and only then start writing the next chapters, I am sorry that I can't post a chapter today, I decided to focus on improving the quality first with the suggestion's of a recent review.

Thank you for the tips and the review I will do the changes later

so better

Hello I am very thankful for you're comment and feedback, I have redone all the chapters for spelling mistakes and changed a few minor thing's, so I wished to ask you to give it a read again if it wont bother you too much and tell me if I missed something else or if I should change anything Thank you

Thank you I will try to improve it

Mc right now

Don't worry everything is fine

"You can always support the author with power stones and comments you know?" -Captain obvious

you can always give me feedback on how to improve the novel