Review Detail of ANewBiz in Devils Dungeon
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At the very least this is intriguing. I'll continue to read and see if there's any improvement in writing and storytelling
Devils Dungeon
BarneyEnjoyer
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Hello I am very thankful for you're comment and feedback, I have redone all the chapters for spelling mistakes and changed a few minor thing's, so I wished to ask you to give it a read again if it wont bother you too much and tell me if I missed something else or if I should change anything Thank you
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BarneyEnjoyer:Hello I am very thankful for you're comment and feedback, I have redone all the chapters for spelling mistakes and changed a few minor thing's, so I wished to ask you to give it a read again if it wont bother you too much and tell me if I missed something else or if I should change anything Thank you