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  • daoist_153
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    Perfect!

    So how was it?
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  • daoist_153
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    Replied to Iterna

    very good suggestion but yes too overpowered as you said but you gave me an idea to bring hogyoku in Martial Peak somehow so thank you for that. And many people have different opinions on what its powers is what do you think hogyoku's true power is?

    Liu Zheng used Sonido to get behind the guy who was just got hit by cero and shot another one at point blank range to his back.
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  • daoist_153
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    More like this with space cracks

    Liu Zheng fired his own void beam, both of them colliding in the middle and distorting the space as well as creating multiple mini space cracks.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1531d
    Replied to j_k_l

    Accepted

    Ch 1 chapter 1
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  • daoist_153
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    Replied to Pengamat_Ketiga

    thank you for your review. I had realised my mistake in only writing first person POV so it is fixed after a few chapters and other things will be improved too as I continue writing but it will be a slow process so I hope for your patience and support.

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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1531d
    Replied to 8ightbit

    It was but it wasn't useful in the long to term so i decided to discard it

    Zangetsu and Liu Zheng really loved the trick so they repeated it on the eagle monster as well as the golden queen bug too in the next few days making the island devoid of any big threats.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1531d
    Replied to Anime_fan1234

    thanks for pointing out

    High Heaven Pavilion provides free contribution points to new disciples for first 6 months to give them some time to start cultivation then we have to do challenges and other tasks every time to get some contribution points. It's been only two months since i entered HHP(high heaven pavilion) so i am free for now. ( might not be such a case in the og story).
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1531d
    Replied to Ronin46

    Where is this from?

    And our MC might create his unique Void Sword Art or Space-Time Sword Art in the future.
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  • daoist_153
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    Between such clashes, they land on the ground fighting each other's sword with pure strength where with each swing of their sword mountains where decimated and the lands were reshaped.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1532d
    Replied to KingKarma_1766

    This form will be utilised later on in this fic though quite far

    "Aren't you quite an interesting one? He already knew about you old man, you can come out now." White said as an old man with glasses and covered in black coat appeared not far from him.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1532d
    Replied to BlooDBury

    Yeah, I had the same thought

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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1532d
    Replied to Davidham_

    I see but since we have already started it. We'll leave it for now

    Liu Zheng asked for these things to practise alchemy in his free time because this is the best way to stay relevant, make connections and most importantly money not just here but everywhere even the demons will value you a lot if you can make them some pills.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1532d
    Replied to Tasha_Williams_0673

    I actually had some other plans for it which could be very useful but I'll see.

    Liu Zheng was in a battle stance with his zanpakuto in his hand, ready to attack at anytime and on the other side was zangetsu with his mask on giving a truly terrifying feeling off of him.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1532d
    Replied to Twelver

    Yeah his back story will always be with him and his zanpakutos only

    She also got to know more about Liu Zheng from only this life because he decided it wasn't time to talk about it yet. There wasn't much to Liu Zheng's story from this life as he has been an orphan for as long as he remembered and even old man told him that his parents had died early on and his relatives who were too poor to raise him had to abandon him to an orphanage under the High Heaven Pavilion where he was later selected for being able to cultivate and then the rest is history.
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  • daoist_153
    daoist_1532d
    Replied to Ronin46

    thank you for your suggestion.

    Liu Zheng was in a battle stance with his zanpakuto in his hand, ready to attack at anytime and on the other side was zangetsu with his mask on giving a truly terrifying feeling off of him.
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  • daoist_153
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    I have decided to add Xue Yue but replacing her design may be as well as her physique and for the other two i have the same opinion for my fic too. Do you have a discord btw?

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  • daoist_153
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    Replied to Ronin46

    Bro its pretty hard to convert weapon types and upgrade them with a logical MP reasoning also as i have already specified that the sword for zanpakuto needs to be a standard one without any special ability so that zanpakuto's special ability can be imprinted on it so my hands are bound a bit too but i am open to any ideas you have as to how i can change that

    Liu Zheng was in a battle stance with his zanpakuto in his hand, ready to attack at anytime and on the other side was zangetsu with his mask on giving a truly terrifying feeling off of him.
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