Hey, I just barely noticed he's barely using his mutant powers and it's a story showing him controlling magic instead.

you know you should do is he should have a muggle-born and half-blood band together and fight all the pure blood who think they are superior but the truth is mostly all powerful people are either half-blood or muggle-born now and pure blood are just weak while with them the accomplished new things because muggles are evolving while the wizard who is mostly pure blood still stuck in the past.

should of paralyzed him and Umbridge to prove a point

I hope Umbridge gets fired or better yet Azkaban because she had cost a lot of auror death and she's going to have to take full responsibility.

your story is really good but you keep putting it he as if it was the girl talking and her as if it was a boy talking

I did that's what It showed me.

I feel like he's going to expose that Ghost Rider and Vigilante Vengeance are the same person.

god it would be better if his parents were Kratos and Athena rather than Aphrodite

you should make another book but every character shows how Harvey has been through and became the world strongest man.

I don't know what's stupid the character or the writer. You're letting women walk all over you and I feel like the reader likes women walking all over him too.

Why hasn't he kill the science dude he would of done that all already other than being a lapdog

Meltdown it's okay but what about Inferno because he has no limits with his fire power

Feel like his antihero name would be Inferno

You have got to make him stop being lost in his own little world it feels like mostly the whole story other than the story of the DC.

Please continue

You should do predator because their looking for ultimate challenge

Are you serious he fast a lot of monsters and he got threatened by an agent really man.

This guy is a wimp and a crybaby it looked like he got his candy stolen

I like how you made this ghost rider develop and involved in the story and the character shows us he'll never back down in a fight even if he has to make heaven on fire if something happens to his family and friends.

And I like how his love interest is with Alex because there are not many books whose love interest is with her and she deserves it in this book and the show. Just can't wait for more of the love birds in the future chapters so keep it up.