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👍👍👍👍 I just want to thank you, I have never been a fan of Harem stories sometimes because they usually focus on the R18 part and neglect the story line or the character and the world development would be one sided and trashy and plus the fact that I have never liked blood family sex but you used the world setting of the story line and all character development to prove that it just takes the right touch make a very good story regardless of the genre for that I appreciate, Truth be told so far so good this story is my favourite harem and R18 story although I have another one in mind named supreme arch Magus, it's still in it early stages and needs time to grow. All I want to say is keep it up and we hope the story keeps going as beautiful as it is now I also have high hopes for the 4 eared elves they just can't continue to be useless especially when we all can smell a battle on the way
please author I can't tell if all the village warriors can use celestial energy now although we heard Orion teaching the village warriors we don't know what happened after that and we don't know how strong they are with celestial and Vilkir energy together we have only heard of Orion using celestial energy
author can you please give us feedback on this novel and if you decide to continue with this story can you please be very explicit with Vaan and Elara first time and please no harem just let Vaan and Elara play as much as they want please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺 pretty please with cherry on top
Although i have never been a big fan of harem novels, I don't mind giving this story a try like i have done for every harem novel i came across, And so far so good the story is going great. But if the MC starts F*ing his mother, sister or daughter like other poorly writing harems i am out immediately, but for now i can assure anyone who wants to start this novel to give it a try because it's really good
This book was good at the beginning and the MC development was amazing but that’s also the problem although the MC is growing but the people around him are not really growing his friends were just sidelined and victor just kept sticking it in every hole he comes across, and the fact that his mother and daughter were included was just wrong I get you want to make a harem but at least be reasonable, the world building is trashy, aside from the MC, other characters development is close to non existent, 3 wives I understand, sleeping with his mother in laws I understand, sleeping with his maids I understand but where I draw the line is sleeping with his mother and daughter especially when is father is still alive and the fact that it seems like the entire world revolves around the MC is just down right wrong, even the first Vampire King had rivals (wolf king and Witch Queen), even his childhood friends were eventually sidelined