Please comment if you find any plot holes, typos or any other errors. Suggestions and critiques welcome.

This promises to be my guilty pleasure! I'm enjoying the direction of the story immensely. Although there's room for improvement, it remains one of the finest in its genre.I sincerely wish you the best and hope the story doesn't remain unfinished. It would be wonderful to see this through to the end.(Many novels of this genre are currently on hiatus now, and I don't want this one to be part of the list)Yours in literary indulgence,Lucas.

All suggestions welcome. Please comment if you find any errors or plot holes.