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tetsuya12322dReplied to daoist_immortal26- tetsuya1231mthPosted
MC is useless..I read a similar novel ..becoming immortal through getting married..it had the same storyline and it was quite good..I haven't found anything better to read so I started reading this ..but the Mc is completely useless..I don't know many bad words to describe him ..but in short mc has got no personality
- tetsuya1232mthCommented
it was supposed to be dark but mc seems to be sunny and warm ..not my liking
Slamming my fist on my chest, I said, "Have I ever failed you before?" - tetsuya1232mthCommented
then why give her hope..if u want to manipulate do it properly ....not act dense..i may be a moron ..i dont understand real life relationships
" No. " - tetsuya1232mthCommented
author make it a harem ..not playing with women and acting dense...nor make it like pokemon
' This is great, I don't get to have fun like this all the time, the last time I had a conversation this intense was with Lumi, even that was a battle of wits for survival, but this, this is purely fun, I got nothing to lose! Nice. ' - tetsuya1233mthCommented
why dont mcs act like humans ..humans first think abt themselves not others
"Looks like I died and this place is hell or king Yama's palace. Atleast I managed to save the woman from those terrorists. Another kid won't have to grow up without his mother." - tetsuya1233mthCommented
why does he talk so much!!
In the next moment, Kenya twisted Kyōka Suigetsu and completely shattered Asuma's heart before pulling out the knife. - tetsuya1233mthCommented
please change the name ..copy from some other fan fiction..it would be nice to read..
[Thats not for you to decide. I shall raise these 2 to be the best of the best!! The older shall be called Itachi Uchiha, while the younger shall be called Alex Uchiha. My sons shall succeed me and dominate everything!!] screamed Fugaku with pride. He ignored Mikoto in the process. - tetsuya1233mthCommented
and how would u know that someone is good-natured or not.
He doesn't steal from people who are poor or good natured. He might be a pickpocketer right now, but he still had his own pride and principles. - tetsuya1233mthCommented
how will he explain the death to anbu and village elders..so much for hiding from danjo and not fighting kakashi
"Hah... this was exciting" said Kozuki as he sat down on the ground his heart still beating fast from the thrilling battle. - tetsuya1235mthPosted
It was so good at the beginning 100 chapters..though the first 1 or 2 chapters were idiotic...but then it became good..to my liking...but than i don't know why..mc starts simping..well not simping probably... But what do u call it when mc kills his faithful subordinate of 1 year just because he knows too much...and afterward gambles his life because of two senior sisters whom he met for a few months and they only followed him for his skills?? Two were not enough ..another one added on senior sister the list shortly..it was then that i dropped this.. It is hard to find novels to one's liking.
- tetsuya1235mthCommented
why no revenge!
Having this thought, his mind went blank and his body stopped breathing. - tetsuya1235mthPosted
It's my first time writing a review ..but I had to because I think it's underrated.. Those who say it's a copy of birth of demonic sword.. are like the previous me ..who don't have the patience to read much and drop after a few chapters.. Its better than birth of demonic sword..i read about 350 chapters in 2days ..no other story excited me this much ..its my first fav now..previously my fav was scoundrel with exchange system ..its better than any novel i have read so far.. it would have been nice if the mother didn't die..but found some business of her own..but everything else is completely to my liking..it would be nice..if someone could recommend me more like this to read..