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Mr_Myeterious6hCommentedHey we know smoker and don't try to explain physique or clothing in one piece it's unorthodox
He is a muscular, white-haired, and brown-eyed man, with a distinct trait of always being seen smoking two cigars at once. He wears a large thick white and blue specialist marine jacket which he keeps open, with greenish fur lining the neck, wrists, and hem. The jacket bears the word for "justice" written on the back of it as far as he could remember. Many cigars are strapped to this jacket. He carries a Seastone-tipped jitte as his weapon. Ian even if stronger by miles than him, admits that Smoker has a cool air about him.detailReincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]Anime & Comics · CrazyGuest- Mr_Myeterious6hCommented
He is musing too much, it's the reason I mostly don't like the iskei type of stories where one knows plot but as it is one piece world there are so many mysteries and other things that you could use to make it more interesting and remember don't play with power that you don't understand properly as his blood purification because it's totally a imposter power which doesn't include in onepiece universe so try to incorporate them
'In a way, Dragon had come here to witness the start of his son's journey. Therefore I should not step in his way… since he will be saved anyways, I should just go ahead of them and if we met in the future then I'll help them somehow, it is not that important anyways… but it would be awesome if I could meet people who are considered only fictional in real life, especially the straw hats…' Ian mused to himself while eating the stonefish slices he cooked.detailReincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]Anime & Comics · CrazyGuest - Mr_Myeterious2dCommented
Really a short chapter and the way you are showing Megumi is like he is going to surpass Itadori and while it's interesting they don't have more time and because the kenjaku team never needed Sukuna in the first place and they would have succeeded maybe.... my assumption. And continue
Ch 34 Chapter 34 - Mr_Myeterious3dCommented
This is too unbearable to read. I don't want to know what a child does unless it's not oden who can even throw his caretaker and swift enough to catch two rabbits at the age of 2 and at 6 he goes to pleasure hall.
"Yes, yes. And he is crawling better than yesterday! How fascinating!" - Mr_Myeterious3dCommented
Well I like your concern but I don't like him crawling all over the places like that. Let him grow with the help of a powerful time skip not the cheap one you used before. And don't make him have anger issues or others because of some low things. There are many methods other than just killing out and venting stress
I want to kill him myself, after all. - Mr_Myeterious3dCommented
Work on your anger issue kid. If luffy has the same thought about garp he wouldn't be the youngest yonko.
Amon's blood started to boil hearing this. 'This bastard… just you wait, wait 8 years. I'll kill you, I'll break all your bones and murder you right in front of everyone.' - Mr_Myeterious3dCommented
I don't like this type of usual freaking out where the author wants to unlock some hidden powers
FUCK. The realization is useless if I die right here! I need to get out of this! Yes, somehow I need to get out. But I have no power, I'm fucking 1 month old for fucks sake! I don't want to die so early! Somebody, help me! - Mr_Myeterious3dReplied to Anime_Asim
well the mountain scene was not technically Mihawk but S-Hawk during the capture mission of Boa Hancock in amazon Lily. And don't forget it was Madra charged an attack from Susano.
His mountain-splitting and sea-splitting slashes were no less impressive than S-rank ninjutsu, and the key was that they didn't require chakra or hand seals. - Mr_Myeterious6dCommented
This is not sigma but masochist. This type of cringe happens in 90's movie not now. And All of us are dead would be a better option than this.
"It's okay. It helps me to calm down." - Mr_Myeterious6dCommented
You know, If he didn't have some system it would be great because he is just too calm, and if you want to make his like that don't justify your words after and after. A writer should leave something for the reader to self explanatory. We all know about zombies and anime it would be pointless and don't make him a good guy by letting them die like this
Yup, if there was a reason why he didn't say anything, it was because he knew it was meaningless. Some people might say to him that he should try more, but the situation before them was too ridiculous, and it was impossible for them to accept. - Mr_Myeterious6dCommented
Well you are right but he is just stupid and plain stupid.
Also, while I know some of you might not like a mature woman, I like it, so please don't blame me. - Mr_Myeterious6dCommented
You should Have explained his power in simple words. It's not an English exam where you have a word count. Use AI or any other creative way to describe his power. That by absorbing DNA he got transformation into said DNA whether fully or partially and also got their said unique features like strong body
As he succeeded, he turned and made a V sign to Kyoko, who was waiting for him with a bright smile. - Mr_Myeterious6dCommented
I don't like that kind of weak willed woman
Naturally, she lost her calm, and she looked at him with a shy expression as a virile young man hugged her body intensely in front of her lover. - Mr_Myeterious7dCommented
If he was letting her go means she isn't a threat at all
Looking at the ladybug on his coat, Asterion pursed his lips, almost laughing, but finally restrained himself and managed not to smile. He would let the woman leave unnoticed, as the revelation of the news was of interest to him. Chaos had always been a ladder that few would climb, but he dared, regardless of how dangerous and risky things would become. - Mr_Myeterious7dReplied to First_Time_Anal
I too agree but I will wait if they had surpassed the normal human age limitation then I would leave
Narcissa showed a rare smile on her lips, seeing his reaction, and hugged him from behind, whispering boldly in his ear. "Asty, I realize that I love you. What should I do?" - Mr_Myeterious7dReplied to breadsticks
Dracko
As Asterion gazed upon the beautiful naked body before him, he couldn't help but feel disdain for Lucius Malfoy, a heterosexual man who couldn't appreciate such a Greek goddess. He deserved to choke on a banana for his lack of appreciation. - Mr_Myeterious7dCommented"I'm sorry, Cissy, I didn't mean to hurt you," his softened voice carried a touch of guilt.
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Again something ridiculous
Asterion sighed in relief at the explanation. He had promised himself that if that old, dirty hat dared to sort him into any house other than Slytherin, he would burn it without hesitation. - Mr_Myeterious7dCommented
Author suck at conversation
Asterion felt a shiver running down his spine at her words. The mere thought of six hormone-filled teenagers together in one room was the vision of an environment akin to hell for someone who loved cleanliness as he did.