this would only be good if he could level others with it as well like his sister or the other girls since his world already has "dungeons"

will there be any race changes? or evolutions? since you already allowed him dragon "parts" I don't know if you'll be doing more since you could make him a full fledged dragon or a different race. Just the bloodline would work as well to strengthen him I guess. Or you could evolve him to High Human or something like that with a cpl boons.

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I'm in love with this so far and tftc. will there be more consistency with the length of the chapters from now on? it just feels weird going from long to short back and forth lol.

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question before I get too far into this book but will he ever have any genuine affection for these girls or will it just be manipulation piled on manipulation while he fakes everything and/or throws them away after using them

thanks for the chapter

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thanks for the chapter

I like both ideas, but I'd probably prefer this one daily. I highly enjoy this story you're doing very good with it. I don't even know a lot of it either. Like Shadowhunters? What's that? But I'm still looking forward to it lol

Yeah that's why I suggested just a few chapters to see how the feedback will be. Maybe when you do the coming mass release, use an author's note or something mentioning trying a different style of writing for the first couple of them and the rest keep the same as they have been to compare the likes and dislikes of the readers. If it doesn't work it's fine, but I also liked seeing your regular paragraphs and would also like to see your transformation as a writer from here on if it is more well received. Anyway keep up the good work it's very good in my opinion.

The only issue I currently have with this novel is it's update speed considering the shorter chapters, but I also understand that you can't always control that. Other than that it's amazing and while I don't particularly see it as an issue I suggest trying to post a few chapters without the AI edits. I've seen a few paragraphs written twice once in your own words and others edited and I feel like yours is more normal if that makes sense. And if you haven't already chosen I'd say go the harem route because he'll need more companions using his own cultivation system and I don't see him getting too close to males with how this technique enhanced Yinlings' looks. Preferably females that would question HEA like Elder Ai though.

can't remember if you e mentioned if you have his full peerage planned out but rossweisse is underrated. she knew so many different types of magic and wasn't her research the catalyst to rizevim breaking trihexas seal? either way she's also rias future peerage so it could alter fate as well.

ah I missed this book

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aren't gods influenced by their divinities though? or am I mixing the thousands of stories Ive read? if they do influence it then it can't be considered entirely her fault for indulging in pleasure since she'd lose her divinity otherwise.