Review Detail of Ecrylixx in Cultivation: I Have Unlimited Epiphanies in the Cultivation World
Review detail
The only issue I currently have with this novel is it's update speed considering the shorter chapters, but I also understand that you can't always control that. Other than that it's amazing and while I don't particularly see it as an issue I suggest trying to post a few chapters without the AI edits. I've seen a few paragraphs written twice once in your own words and others edited and I feel like yours is more normal if that makes sense. And if you haven't already chosen I'd say go the harem route because he'll need more companions using his own cultivation system and I don't see him getting too close to males with how this technique enhanced Yinlings' looks. Preferably females that would question HEA like Elder Ai though.
Cultivation: I Have Unlimited Epiphanies in the Cultivation World
Lolster45
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Yeah that's why I suggested just a few chapters to see how the feedback will be. Maybe when you do the coming mass release, use an author's note or something mentioning trying a different style of writing for the first couple of them and the rest keep the same as they have been to compare the likes and dislikes of the readers. If it doesn't work it's fine, but I also liked seeing your regular paragraphs and would also like to see your transformation as a writer from here on if it is more well received. Anyway keep up the good work it's very good in my opinion.
Lolster45:I see, thank you for the suggestion. I just thought people would hate my own words.
Ecrylixx:Yeah that's why I suggested just a few chapters to see how the feedback will be. Maybe when you do the coming mass release, use an author's note or something mentioning trying a different style of writing for the first couple of them and the rest keep the same as they have been to compare the likes and dislikes of the readers. If it doesn't work it's fine, but I also liked seeing your regular paragraphs and would also like to see your transformation as a writer from here on if it is more well received. Anyway keep up the good work it's very good in my opinion.
