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Dreadfull_Dusk

Dreadfull_Dusk

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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3d
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    Hi there, shameless author here redoing this review! I would give this book five stars, because I made it, obviously. Some might not like it, and that's fine. Others might not like me because I sometimes delete chapters and redo them. (Don't worry, it won't happen again!) But if you do enjoy it, thank you! This book features a unique mix of a villainous main character who also has a hardworking nature and genuine emotions. There are parts that some of you might not like, such as the parenting themes and relatable aspects of parenthood (even though I'm just a teen). The story blends slice of life, action, and emotional impact. Around chapters 30-35, the main character gets a newborn baby. Trust me, it doesn’t slow down the action and plot; if anything, it drives the story forward. I wanted the main character to not be an outright villain from the start but to gradually become more villainous as the story progresses. The system text and abilities may change over time and are currently developing at a slow pace, but everything speeds up after volume two! Please bear with me as my writing will improve over time. I'm juggling brainstorming, crafting, and writing all at once, so there may be some rough patches. However, I am committed to daily updates with two chapters a day at 5 PM. I hope you enjoy this journey as much as I am and grow to like the characters. (Don't worry about the kids part – adults and war will be coming in volume three. Give it and me some time!)

    Anomaly's Reincarnation
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Replied to Neo_Matiste

    I won'ttt!

    Anomaly's Reincarnation
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Replied to Kai_John_2W

    Lmafoo, I know right but that will come into play in the future ;)

    Anomaly's Reincarnation
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Replied to Bean_bear

    Alright! thank youuu!

    Anomaly's Reincarnation
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Replied to Astro_Love_0714

    Thank you for your review, I will work on the improving my writing it just takes time🙆‍♂️

    Anomaly's Reincarnation
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Posted

    Great story, it moves at a slow pace, but it kind of make sense. I love the way you portray your characters, and the plot is very intriguing! Wonderful web novel!

    Alchemist Knight: Under a Shadow of Moonlight
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Commented
    Ch 2 Vending Machine
    Alchemist Knight: Under a Shadow of Moonlight
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Commented
    Ch 1 Takeuchi
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Replied to Nah_I_shall_pirate

    Thank you for the review, will take your advice and try to improve on the further chapters! [img=recommend]

    Anomaly's Reincarnation
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk1mth
    Replied to Im_LaZy_007

    No harem here!!

    Ch 1 Into the Abyss
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Posted

    Shameless author here- :)) Hii, I know you know you might think she's a bit to emotional it int that starting but I want to get over her goal and stuff first can form her into proper villain. (Just saying she's not an out right villain) . So please just take you time and read it and watch how she is formed into the villain she is meant to be.

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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Posted

    Great character, awesome plot, a nice writing style i'm impressed. Keep up the fine work. Great introductions to the main character noiceee! continue on this awesome part!

    Reincarnation chronicles: How to noble
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Replied to Ranch64

    I will tryyy![img=recommend] thank you btww!

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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Replied to ken_kent

    Thank you!!! so muchh![img=recommend]

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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Posted

    It's really a unique story for sure. It gives it depth and nice touch that just seem right yk. You have great writing style and the pace of the story is good as well. Keep up the workk!

    The A.I wars
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Posted

    Shameless author here)) I know, I know, I'm a bad bear but who gives me wrong i wanna put down some questions and answer it myself! What is the book about?- It's about a girl named Azar who lives in world where the meaning of living means nothing and getting power means everything. How often do you post?- I have a very complexed schedule as a student ofc. OMG!, yes I'm a highschooler. Is all of these stuff relevant to the plot?- Yep, everything I mention means something but the people and other stuff i go more into is relevant to the plot for sure Why is your MC so complexed?- Because who isn't complexed and doesn't know what they truly want. Most people have multiple goals in there heads. What type of person even is Azar?- She is complexed, like really complexed with her emotions and goals but she is very funny and a nice person. Is there romance?- Yes there is even some lgbtq ones as well! Have questions just ask!

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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Posted

    Really good story. The main lead is very inserting and intriguing. The development in the story is also good. The pace is good for me. Nice work! [img=recommend]

    The strongest human is a cheater
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk3mth
    Posted

    This is a very well-written novel for sure. It is exciting and great to read, I love the pace its going at right now. Keep up the good work!

    Astral Prodigy: The Reincarnated Genius in the Shadows
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk4mth
    Commented

    My wonderful wifey

    Astelia draws her sword, pointing it to Dricus. She laughs devilishly as she slowly approaches her with a smile. 
    Shackles: Potential Unleashed
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  • Dreadfull_Dusk
    Dreadfull_Dusk4mth
    Commented

    so mean (ノへ ̄、)

    "It's been too long since I've seen a building, let me sink this moment in dammit!" Zane shouts back. 
    Shackles: Potential Unleashed
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