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Nehode4mthCommented"The penalty would be that your dick permanently shrinks by four inches…."- Nehode4mthCommented
It really is a manga. Being in a relationship but not kissing only exists in manga.
Meanwhile, Ji-Min seemed to be trying to increase the scale of intimacy with his girlfriend. After all, they had been dating for well over a month, and yet they had not even kissed yet. Thus, he attempted to grab the woman's hand while she was looking at her phone. But before he could do so, Su-Jin practically screamed her thoughts out loud. - Nehode4mthCommentedRather than mope around and be depressed, Ji-Ho suddenly found himself with a newfound resolve. He would fight for his girl, even if it meant beating the shit out of her douchebag of an older stepbrother. After all, he had trained in Taekwondo all his life as a secondary sport to soccer. And though he was no champion, he had earned himself a black belt upon turning sixteen.
- Nehode4mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1. Liam Nolan
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What's the author name? Because I didn't find it with your name.
[A/N: Read my other story, "The Devil's Harem".] - Nehode4mthCommented
What's the video? Just sign some paper and go to the DMV later to register the sale.
And with that, the deal was done. The man transferred $1000, to Rick, recorded a video, and rode away with his daughter. - Nehode4mthCommented
Good deal? What do you know about the bike? If Rick wasn't tne MC I would say Mike got scammed.
"$1000? Are you sure about it though? This is quite a good deal for me," Mike was a bit surprised by the price offered. - Nehode4mthCommented
35000$ is not extravagant? What's the store? Cartier?
"I... I don't believe it," Zack stuttered, he hurriedly ran towards the sales lady who sold the pendant to Rick and was smiling ear to ear. After today, one thing that she will make sure to remember was to never judge someone of their looks. She was a bit worried when she saw Rick, but the latter put rest to all his worries. He did not buy anything too extravagant, but it was a good sell. - Nehode4mthCommented
Hot ones. Who cares about age.
Q 1. What do you guys prefer? - Nehode4mthCommented
You don't feel a piece a paper in your hand? Weird
"This..." In Rick's hand there was a $100 bill. Since it was just one bill, he didn't feel it in his hand. - Nehode4mthCommented
How long was he in the hospital?
Her mind was flooded with questions and self-doubt. She couldn't understand why Rick had suddenly disappeared from her life, leaving her feeling abandoned and hurt. - Nehode4mthCommented
He doesn't work with her
She sighed as if hesitating to say something. "Just... be mindful of your actions, especially with people you work with." - Nehode4mthCommented
The coworker didn't know about Amanda's relationship. So for her she is going for a single guy.
"Absolutely. If she can go after her friend's man. What is stopping her from ditching him for some other dude?" Rick said, sincerity evident in his voice, "I can guarantee that in no less than a week she will be banging some rich dude. Just be yourself and enjoy the journey. You don't need to worry. And with these melons... Ohh... ho... ho... You definitely don't need to," Rick said and gently pinched her boobs. - Nehode4mthCommented
He has muscles?
Likewise, Amanda's eyes ran up and down Rick's body. What a stud he was. She had never seen a guy naked so up close. Let alone a guy with such a chiseled body. He had obviously been working out. His muscles were flexing and shining with sweat as he worked. - Nehode4mthCommented
Oh, I will...
[A/N: Search my other book on Webnovel or Google: " The Devil's Harem ". There are already 200+ chapters.] - Nehode4mthCommented
"with that rack" singular
"That was... That was something else," Though Rick let go of her breasts, his gaze continued to linger on those big white boobs of Amanda, 'How did she remain a virgin with these racks?' Rick found it hard to believe. - Nehode4mthCommented
Did he have to use crutches to walk? And now he can have aggressive s€x?
And he succeeded. With a sudden surge of boldness, Amanda placed her hands on Rick's chest and pushed him backwards until his back met the wall. She leaned in, their faces inches apart, and a playful glint danced in her eyes. - Nehode4mthCommented
Seriously? This is a hospital not a church, he can curse if he wants
"Mr. Rick, watch your language, please. This is a hospital, not a sailor's bar," The doctor said frowning. But did Rick care? As if his stars had aligned, the doctor was another beauty and his jaws dropped. - Nehode4mthPosted
I don't care about Michael Fang ir his territory. The author didn't manage to make me care about the MC. The story was enjoyable for a while even if it wasn't the greatest but at some point I realized I never was invested in the characters and so I stopped reading after 300 chapters.The author never gives information until it's too late. It's like he didn't have an idea in mind but kept writing and when he made a decision he gave us the information out of the blue.One example is the MC's family. His parents disappeared and we don't know why but we learn hundreds of chapters later the MC knew all along why. It was just never shared with the reader and we thought there was some mystery but no.Another one is the way the author nerfs MC to make him struggle. It was never explained why he was slow in cultivation until the author gave us the information. Information which is widely known and his teachers could have told him but same thing, the information was shared when the author thought about it, it wasn't something secret or anything so why the wait?I feel like the author isn't sure of hiw his story will unfold so he describes nothing.MC made plans with people and he has insightful ideas. We don't know the plan and what MC's ideas are.His territory gets bigger and better but no details about his territory. We don't know how his people live, what's around it and who manage it when MC is away. It should be the maid but she is also busy with fighting monsters. 20000 people in his territory, he is away often and apparently there is no governing body.Too many things are so vague, secondary characters aren't developed and like always, MC has a very short time to save the day. I will remove the novel from my library.
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It started great but it quickly evolved into a generic storyline with constant ennemies who are always more and more powerful but not overwhelming so.I like the MC's cheat. He can always improve. It doesn't seem like a broken cheat because the MC has to make efforts to improve. But I don't like his skill point for the opposite reason, too easy to learn skills and no effort on his part.I could deal with that if the author didn't want to keep the readers on their toes by making the MC have countless ennemies for no reasons. Someone sees the MC improve quickly and thinks "he has to have a breathing technique to help him grow so quickly" so he wants to kill the MC. Of course he has no evidence and breathing techniques can't be learned before a threshold of power (which is way higher than the MC's current power) so why does he think that.And most reasons for being MC's mortal ennemy are as stupid. It made me drop the novel.And apart from the MC, all other characters are irrelevant. He is also a loner so the characters are one dimension because they dissappear from tne story after a few chapters. The life of the MC is training, training, training, fight ennemies he made somehow, escaping because they are so strong, training, come back to easily overpower his ennemies and repeat as many times as you want.