that's what's up!

Can't say I'm a fan of the whole phantom society idea

ty for chapter, need this arc to finish up, read the story for Mr Jun and his development and feel like he's being lost now that cannon has been reached

maybe favorite chapter in the entire story

Where's the update at this story is a masterpiece, set up a patreon yo

getting to the thick of it! should generate a bunch of chapters cause I need to see how this plays out asap!!!!

first chapter was fine. look what happens when you let a bunch of cowards herd you, you lose your interest in writing YOUR OWN story. this story is top tier amazing, hope to see the newest dragon teammate and its a latios, love you

great chapter, fight was excellent

I find this story and become addicted to it but new chapters stop :(

you could have the same exact story and your character not be 5 and would be no different. age shouldn't matter as your protagonist is a God in a year so like why am I reading about a 5 year old, can put him in at like 12 or 16 or 20 and nothing would change and it would be way less pedo

cash grab plagiarism. if you are going to translate something, at least give the link to the original work.

eh, decent ending but half the chapters was moves being listed. I'm not sure why authors have a fetish for this but If I can let you in on a little secret, I didn't read a single one. that means half this chapter was just skipped and that leads me to skipping more along the way as I'm less invested. still interested but definitely disappointed after the first chapter

cool concept. there are enough stories starting off on step 1 so always interesting to see something different. hoping it's not just legendary bombs all around and it sticks to these two but liking what I'm reading!

I was tough on you so let me say this, these last 10 chapters have been perfect. writing is well done, battles were good and story progressed. there wasn't useless filler and by goly man, great job

Almost at 700 chapters, and there have been maybe 5 memorable ones. Every chapter is the same recipe, and I'm like this is the top book on the site it must get better.... but it does not. what's the recipe? 4-6 paragraphs of acutal story, a Pokémon contacting him to breakthrough, all the details twice about the pokemon (this has to be the most useless word count increasing idea ever, it's so dumb) thanks for listing out 50 moves that we have seen at most twice. Let's give the example after he graduated, like 15 chapters of him cooking food and meeting all these pokemon, and it could have been done once or twice with a summary of who he got for the rest. Consistent needless repetion that adds no actual value to the story

I agree with the above comment. The last two chapters should have been one chapter, but you have a patreon, so you are incentivized for more chapters over the quality of each chapter

How this story is so successful is quite crazy to me. About 300 chaps in and half of your story is "this week is going well, sebs endurance has increased to A rank." Like, what does that even mean!?!?! I'm not saying write out a training montage but I don't remember an instance where we see some actual training like "hashirama trained his endurance by using vine whip on a tree trunk for 12 hours" just something if it's going to be most of your text. Grammar is great, but the age thing is super weird. he's 3, but he looks 17 and interacts with a 4 year old? just have him go to college or something, it reads Hella weird. Pokemon selection to each their own and no comment here. I could probably think of more, but yea, it's a super dry story that you can skip half the chapter cause it's filler and that I have no clue how is so popular

words bumps, part that keeps getting skipped**

The level listing of moves has to be one of the biggest one could bumps lol. I would recommend simplifying that as it's a block of text that keeps getting stick. Do you honestly think making half of the chapter just level 40 skill does this, 45 does this? If you feel the need to do it just put it all in one paragraph, like future sight level 50, takes 5 mins and is fast, don't need to have 4 paragraphs saying each level what it does.

Good! it's about time we see mr.mc They get in a fight. He has a hype team, but we haven't really gotten to see it in action yet beyond Mavis and her zone, so we are definitely waiting for that next chapter. I'm curious if you are taking the zone if you take other things from the show or if just sticking with that cause it kinda fits with aura/adrenalin