Review Detail of Zromak in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

How this story is so successful is quite crazy to me. About 300 chaps in and half of your story is "this week is going well, sebs endurance has increased to A rank." Like, what does that even mean!?!?! I'm not saying write out a training montage but I don't remember an instance where we see some actual training like "hashirama trained his endurance by using vine whip on a tree trunk for 12 hours" just something if it's going to be most of your text. Grammar is great, but the age thing is super weird. he's 3, but he looks 17 and interacts with a 4 year old? just have him go to college or something, it reads Hella weird. Pokemon selection to each their own and no comment here. I could probably think of more, but yea, it's a super dry story that you can skip half the chapter cause it's filler and that I have no clue how is so popular