agreed , this dude is just way too op at the start of the story FFS

his goal is to come back to his wife , there probably won't be any love interest

thanks for the review buddy , i don't think I managed to do a great tragedy story out of this but I tried and it's not really focused on a tragedy if iIhave to be honest but do read it and if you like it write a review , thanks a lot

tell me , so far how does the story seem to you ? it's my first time publishing one of my works and this one is a really recent idea so I'd like to know what you think

do leave a comment whenever something seems a bit abnormal , it will help me greatly . 🙏🏼

the thing is , we didn't see much of hashirama , but when shown he was someone somewhat goofy and clumsy in chilled situations and with strong convictions when needed , all I did was add a bit more depths in a few characteristics that make him up . of course all of that under my own interpretation it may differ from person to person but that is how I truly see Hashirama

hmm you are right it does feel kind of bland thanks a lot mate

stolen idea ? kaito Uzumaki son of Minato and kushina , narutos brother? not cool buddy .

he looks like this : imagine him with black and orange eyes.

something like that couldnt'tfind anything else

that's good anyway if there's any mistake in my fiction do point them out if that's no inconvenience

i feel you brother , I do hope that this fiction will be as good as I imagined if not I might get depressed , on a serious note go read the wind calamity it's a great Naruto fiction

I'll try to find a picture of some sort

I will say this here don't even ask for a Harem , everyone has his own tast but this is not mine , rather I hate it so don't bother .

damn .... that's... deep AF , even my 12 yo self wouldn't chosen such a name lmao

it's... okay I'd say , the big problem with this story it's how the author writes , it gives the characters no depth and just the way his whole family died i could see it miles away . overall it's something to read if there's nothing left to read .

wait he really named himself chaos overlord ?

to be honest I didn't think that would be so disappointed in the taste of fanfic readers but here we are. my problem is , it's badly written like really, to give you an example : Yami finished the ninja off then went to the other one killed him killed the next one ... it's bland , there's no taste to it , and the MC is supposed to be a calculating MC etc ?? well he isnt't.

usually I wouldn't write a comment on any kind of fanfic , but this deserves one . The pace is really good it's smoothand flows without hurting my brain ,the backroung is great we have an overview about a lot of things that are interesting , our MC is likeable and doesn't act like a moron and if he does its because he's still a kid (and for me it's understandable ) we also have a picture of hiruzen which describes him perfectly as he's neither a bad guy nor an overly loving gramps , he's just incompetent like really . I know a lot of people won't like this FF because it's either "not fast enough" or there's no " harem" or no "romantic interest" let me tell you this is not a fiction written by some kid , don't try to corrupt the Story with your infantile mind.

ps -I'm astonished by the number of good ratings it seems overly suspicious or at least weird