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I hope that you don't keep nerfing the MC in future fights. It's understandable for him to want to hide his crews power, but his power is already known, so the whole Akainu fight was completely pointless because he wasn't even going all out and also seemed to forget how to use certain things. I understand you want to make the fights interesting, but nerfing your MC is not the way, it just makes me want to skim through everything because he's not even trying, so it just feels pointless. Don't get me wrong, I know him going all out at the beginning would be extremely boring, but at least let him remember to use his basic abilities, getting ambushed when he has observation haki is just nonsense, you can't even use the excuse that his body can't react fast enough or that would just negate all of his training and gains throughout the journey so far, the only one that should be capable of ambushing him at this point(that we've seen) is Kizaru. Remember, reacting is different from pure speed.
Bro needs to level up his observation haki. His body is definitely good enough to react to something that he can see coming, but he has been caught lacking two or 3 times in this fight, the only explanation is that he forgot that he has observation haki. Akainu is nowhere near fast enough for him to be unable to react.
Any yuri?
Fuwa Fuwa Time!!
ohhh, I would really enjoy a good Cyberpunk fanfic!!!
Ehh, I guess I was wrong about him relying on her to challenge the really strong characters, it just seemed that way with him calling for her when he wanted to challenge Mihawk. Really glad that you proved me wrong. Idk why that moment cemented the MC as weak in my mind, but I really disliked the way she was being used as a safety net because he didn't want to learn haki.
Since he refuses to learn haki, all it would take is them sending an Admiral to him and he would fold instantly. Bro is doing big things, but doesn't have the strength to protect his people when his enemies actually get serious. I honestly hope Enel or Crocodile clap him so he learns not to be arrogant. He'll just rely on Yamato for the actual strong guys though.
Finally, now he confidently claim to be the 2nd strongest in his crew lol.
Please keep this same energy with Damon, fans and characters in the show tend to dislike the Originals and love Damon, dude is in the same boat as the OGs as far as morals are concerned. One of the worst characters got the happiest ending, it frustrated me soooo much lol.
"Listens to the readers and writes what they want to read" LMAO, he has gotten the same complaints in EVERY fanfic he has written, he just keeps introducing uncomfortable situations and tries to justify it by using some kind of weird logic. I won't deny that he is an incredible writer, but the whole listening to readers thing is straight cap. I was also once a ptreon member, so don't say that he only listens to those lol. Ein, my bad if you see this, but this was so funny I had to reply, good luck on the story =)
Ok, that's fine for me, it's not them being bi that's the issue lmao, it's just that for some reason authors on here tend to make them join the MCs harem just so they can be with certain girls, most of the time they show little interest in the MC lol. I just got fed up with those, so I avoid all harems with bi characters in them now. Also, thanks for the quick reply! Looking forward to reading your fics!
Any yuri in this or your Marvel fics? Idk about DC, but Marvel fics with harems ALWAYS make every girl bi just to justify having a harem...Bottom line, I don't like yuri as you can tell by my name, so is there yuri in any of your fics? I wanna hop in, so patiently waiting for an answer. I also see you have exams, so good luck on those! =)
Breathed a sigh of relief right here, I had flashbacks of reading that one fanfic that kept the joke going for too long...