Finally. I was honestly waiting for something to happen with Selena because if nothing happened then she shouldn't have been written in.

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It don't mind if he killed the gnomes but it was a bonehead move considering he could have upped his future subordinates max hp by having a steady supply.

Just great, more made up useless drama. Mikoto literally told the dude that she's fine with him sleeping with other chicks but now all of a sudden fugaku either forgot or is just a drama queen trying to make more drama. Plus he chose such a mob character to fall in love with, its honestly sad.

Be more consistent. You said in earlier chapters that Uchiha had more chakra but all of sudden they're no better than civilian shinobi.

Finally got that sweet sweet space sword.

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Bruh this fic makes no sense. If has no knowledge about the anime or manga then why have his previous life memories. The MC just should have been an OC who was blessed by some made up god or ghost of one piece instead of this dumpster fire.

Unneeded chapter especially with the release schedule being what it is. Plus no-one cares about the mobs waiting for the MC to return because they'll just be the same as canon just better I guess with the resources of Bruce. Pls don't do another chapter like this.

Great fic. And then the MC went to mist and the story just fell apart. Nothing but repeated bullshit about brainwashing people around him and him pussyfooting around and letting everyone and there mama beat him and kill konoha shinobi. Dude is afraid or just plain stupid because he probably thinks that he'll take over the village but by then konoha would already be the other great villages bitch. Dude thinks he a mastermind but didn't account for the village higher ups to capitulate to every village because of his hair brained schemes. At this point I'm just waiting for konoha to get invaded because that how I see this fic going because of the MC's procrastination in mist.

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The team he chose to finally kill orochimaru is filled with nothing but mobs. Why doesn't he at least try to get Gai to join him because I don't see how any of the others he chose can do anything but get in the way. Yugao sword getting cut in half along with her body because of kusanagi, Inuzuka becoming useless when her dogs get devoured or poisoned by snakes, anko just being in the fight will be a bother with her issues. I guess the mission will go unsuccessful once again.

Pretty dumb fic. MC reborn into uchiha clan but is a nerfed uchiha (Low chakra and talent). Then if that wasn't enough of a challenge the MC is pretty brain dead. His schemes are so dumb that its a surprise that the dude is even still alive when he faced itachi. Its like the MC didn't even have knowledge of canon and characters with the way he just keeps acting and trusting other shady characters. Then his biggest flaw is his cowardice in acting or killing problematic people or in general. Guy can't even kill when be goes after bounties which is just retarded when you think about the world he lives in.

Bruh at this point Ted should be written off the fic. He's honestly just taking up chunks of the story with his useless nonsense.

Tower of joy. Hoe picked the wrong dude. Plus too much work to do if he saves her, like raising her kids which will earn the enmity of the King, earning his Lords ire by not saving his sister for some used booty. Dudes got to make the right choice. It even comes with a sword.

Too short. Split the long chapters in 2 instead of 3.

👎 bruh you can't just make the villains OP when the MC has to deal with your retardedly strong gods that will be appearing while he still weak af.

I don't know how to describe this fic. The first 10 chapters are short but full of unneeded idle conversation with the MC and his sentient system which gets annoying fast. It was kinda hard to continue reading so I guess make your own opinions if you can.