Great fic. And then the MC went to mist and the story just fell apart. Nothing but repeated bullshit about brainwashing people around him and him pussyfooting around and letting everyone and there mama beat him and kill konoha shinobi. Dude is afraid or just plain stupid because he probably thinks that he'll take over the village but by then konoha would already be the other great villages bitch. Dude thinks he a mastermind but didn't account for the village higher ups to capitulate to every village because of his hair brained schemes. At this point I'm just waiting for konoha to get invaded because that how I see this fic going because of the MC's procrastination in mist.
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