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(Former) Harry Potter enthusiast, part-time isekai anime enjoyer and novice writer Find me on other platforms: https://www.wattpad.com/user/Mthuzian https://www.fanfiction.net/u/16197916/OrzBeta

2023-08-30 JoinedGlobal
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    Replied to Qwindich

    I think it's because Hermione's in her first year, all innocent, and didn't really see house elves any differently from magical school caretakers, much like Hagrid or Filch. Honestly, I think Filch received much worse treatment and bitterness, being a Squib while surrounded by young wizards who hate him.

    "I must've dozed off before I realized it. The bed and room are just impeccably made. Harry, did you know that house elves are responsible for making all our beds and cooking of every meal?...", Hermione rambled on.
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    A Summoner in the Wizarding World
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    OrzBeta1mth
    Commented

    Ty for the chapter

    Ch 448 Beach Stars I
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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    OrzBeta1mth
    Commented

    Probably Liz in my imagination

    As I strode somewhat unconfidently forwards, a pink-haired girl tilted her head with a soft: "Good morning". From the plan, her name apparently was Elizabeth, and in my memory she's referred to by practically everyone as "Liz" - a decently common name, back in those days. So common, in fact, that in secondary and onward, we had to label those with that name A and B to figure out which one is which.
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    Yilse's Re-Life Story
    Fantasy · OrzBeta
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    OrzBeta1mth
    Posted

    You won't really be bored of it and the author updates consistently. Problem is, especially most recent chapters (400+) are obviously AI generated with little to no effort at changing that robotic dialogue and the story has serious pacing issues. Other than that, a fine read to pass the time when you're looking for the next big novel.

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    Tycoon of Video Games
    Video Games · NewComer714
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    OrzBeta2mth
    Commented

    Pretty sure eSports such as LoL is mostly running at a deficit

    Initially, KiShin Global eSports represented a financial challenge for KiShin. However, following the conclusion of the inaugural KiShin Global eSports event in 2001, the situation began to shift favorably. The rise in popularity of video games like "Counter-Strike" and "StarCraft" played a pivotal role in this transformation. These titles, among others, captivated a global audience, leading to a significant increase in revenue for KiShin.
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    Tycoon of Video Games
    Video Games · NewComer714
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    OrzBeta2mth
    Commented

    no KT vs SKT?

    Then the audience watched the ongoing competition between the SK Telecom T1 and Hanwha, the Hanwha prioritized on macro play, focusing on building a strong economy and powerful army composition. Their Terran player, Kim, used a standard bio build with vultures and marines, while their Zerg player, Jujka, went for a muta-lurker composition. Their strategy relied on map control, scouting, and strategically timed attacks to overwhelm their opponents.
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    Tycoon of Video Games
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    OrzBeta3mth
    Posted

    As the first story I've tried writing, it's definitely not the best fanfiction you can find on this site, and far from the other Harry Potter fics that others have written. The concept of summoning is also not new, though League of Legends fans will recognise I take a lot from that lore and will continue to do so. I do try to follow the plot as much as possible, so do point out mistakes if you see them. Have fun reading!

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    A Summoner in the Wizarding World
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    OrzBeta4mth
    Commented

    Be careful Monopoly's different country versions gets sold as full-price DLCs. EA would definitely do it.

    Meanwhile, KiShin's new subsidiary, Electronic Arts, was actively developing a video game centered around simulation games—the Sims genre. Unlike other game genres, this category had not been deeply explored.
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    Tycoon of Video Games
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    OrzBeta4mth
    Posted

    A slightly shameless 4-star from the author. This novel is my first creation and an idea I've been brewing for a long, long time. It's heavily inspired, plot-wise, by modern knowledge type of novels, with my own twist to the protagonist and some settings from literature I like such as Pride and Prejudice. It's a light wish-fulfillment fantasy, perhaps a misunderstanding story - one I'm not sure where it might go.

    This book has been deleted.
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    OrzBeta6mth
    Replied to EveCN

    The name is Genshin Impact: Liyue opens an Internet cafe, and the identities of the seven gods are exposed link: w uxiap.com/e/action/ShowInfo.php?classid=1&id=76393 I think the author used and slightly tweaked most ideas here, but they are mostly same (15000mora/h -> 10000mora/h, pc -> mobile, liyue -> monstadt) but except for having less chapters I quite like this one

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    Genshin Impact: I am developing a mobile game in Mondstadt
    Video Games · Ulimate_random
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    OrzBeta7mth
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    2 for character because Ian in the baby drama is frankly a nuisance - prepare for it, because dramas take up 10 to 20-ish chapters, makes you really not focus on movie releases. Really the story in general, but the writing to me is satisfactory, maybe the beginning starts with the MC being bashed for things he did not do too much, but it gets OK later on.

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    Hollywood King
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    OrzBeta7mth
    Commented

    the whole drama is dragged for 5 ish chapters now. it's a hollywood harem novel and wish-fulfillment does not really need outside drama - corporate espionage, woke-marketing (a stretch, but acceptable), actor's family small family drama, whatever. NOT whatever this baby case is supposed to be - it should have ended in 5 chapters or be told from more perspective as it advances, not Ian ruining everything, short drama scenes back to back. That's just bad pacing and filler. Sorry author the novel is good but I just had to get this out

    Ch 161 Chapter 156 | Felt so good!
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    Hollywood King
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    OrzBeta7mth
    Commented

    Fright Night at Freddy's comics? Talking automatons and all, it definitely will make those toys seem horrific instead of children-friendly

    In fact, Alexander had a pretty interesting strategy to try out with this one. Instead of having Miss Marker and Mr. Advertiser bickering through their unresolved rivalry, it was going to be a market intersection between the two toys.
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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    OrzBeta7mth
    Commented

    From the VA and actor arc the grandfather's push felt (to me) more like incentive for plot? His push in all honesty could be fine if done off screen and without a lot of comment (like a passing thing) because then it won't feel like the grandfather is insulting the maturity of Alex as he's supposedly the writer of Watchmen, Back to the Future and manager of a business himself. Maybe this pairing will lead to better plot, who knows, just some food for thought? Thank you author for great story though!

    Ch 236 Messier "Social" Circle
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
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    OrzBeta7mth
    Commented

    buy Star Wars rights later so that Disney doesn't ruin it?

    - hounded by Star Wars fans
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
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    OrzBeta7mth
    Posted

    The author's perspective and details while making the plot somewhat lacking in action and tension as of chapter 81, makes up with character coherence and likeability. The opening introduction and insight into Alexander's personality was quite unique, something I learnt to appreciate from the numerous lackluster SI reincarnation on this site

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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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