Review Detail of OrzBeta in A Summoner in the Wizarding World

As the first story I've tried writing, it's definitely not the best fanfiction you can find on this site, and far from the other Harry Potter fics that others have written. The concept of summoning is also not new, though League of Legends fans will recognise I take a lot from that lore and will continue to do so. I do try to follow the plot as much as possible, so do point out mistakes if you see them. Have fun reading!