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_Akiran_

_Akiran_

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An introvert who likes to keep everything to himself. but also has friends he is very attached to. A bookworm who loves anime and Manga and light/Webnovels.

2023-08-04 JoinedIndia
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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6d
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    "Hey there ! this is Shameless 5-star author review !" as a writer of this story, what I say might not mean much, but hey, doesn't hurt to listen right? I wanted to write this story for a very long time. it's always in my head, the plot, the characters, and now I couldn't wait to get it out of my system anymore. so here we are. Devine Reckoning!. I must say, that really was something good I came up with. okay, now the point of this review: after the first 25 chapters I thought I'd write this to answer anything my dear readers wanted to know. so, does it have romance 💕 ? yes. Action and adventure? yes and yes. science fiction ? definitely. 💯. magic and superpowers? Hell yeah !!! so if you have any questions please ask them bellow, I'll be really glad to answer them.

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_4mth
    Replied to ItzNeedless

    Soon. Hopefully, this month. And Sorry for the inconvenience. And thank you for supporting me (honestly). This this gonna be one helluva long book, but bear with me. I'll try to make it as good as possible.

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_4mth
    Replied to Raphis

    I didn't create the cover by myself. But yes, it was created by using midjourney.

    Divine Reckoning: Surviving The Godfall Apocalypse
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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_4mth
    Replied to Romance_guy

    Yes. There is romance (but no harem)

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Commented

    Even those simple things could be very hard in a world turned upside down. That's why it is qualified as a trial of gods. (They will be explored in the later chapters)

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Commented

    Chris is Robert's friend since college. He appears in chapter 1 too. He joins military following after Robert.

    Robert's eyes widened. "Chris?"
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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Commented

    Robert. For those who don't know, This guy appears in chapter 1. he joins military after the apocalypse. (he's a prodigy at handling military weapons)

    Robert Gill, one of the elite trainees, was testing his new weapon, the Viper X-1, still a prototype, provided to him by R&D. He was inside simulation chamber 3, which recreated the blasted wastelands of Los Angeles.
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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Replied to Immortal_Gorgan

    Sure. I'll read your book, and give you an honest review.

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Replied to _Akiran_

    Don't stop writing. It's good.

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Replied to _Akiran_

    Oh! And you might want to keep the word count of each chapter 1.2k to 1500 words.The chapters are 'too' short. (Nothing wrong with that. But sometimes the readers might think it's a short story rather than a webnovel.)

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
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    I'll be honest. This is a fantastic book with great potential. It is a unique story! I think. The author's writing style is impressive and engaging, making it an enjoyable read. I would suggest that the author aims for more consistent chapter releases, preferably one per day (maybe two), to keep readers engaged. The world-building and character design are strong points of the book. However, there is room for improvement in character interactions, as the story sometimes feels more like a personal diary than a dynamic narrative. There is no Dialogue! I started to feel like he didn't talk at all in the story. Despite these minor issues, I appreciate the story and want to support the author in their writing journey. Good Luck!

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Replied to Immortal_Gorgan

    If you don't mind, I want you give an honest review to my book 'Divine Reckoning: surviving the godfall Apocalypse' and I appreciate it whether it's good or bad. I'm still an amature writer so it's cool

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Replied to Stefano_Filippini

    Oh! I'll be glad to exchange reviews. I'd never disappoint a good read. I love reading, and I think good books should deserve their attention.

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Commented

    Funny thing, I've never been to New York before. So overlook the details if I'm wrong.

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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_6mth
    Commented

    I'm starting with something new. And I hope you like it.

    Prologue: Three Months Ago
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  • _Akiran_
    _Akiran_7mth
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    Shameless 5-star author review!!!Hello, dear readers! I'm thrilled to introduce you to my debut novel. After immersing myself in countless web novels, I thought, "Why not create one of my own?" And here we are! If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask in the comments below, and I promise to answer them all honestly. It's been quite a journey, but I'm proud to say that I've completed the first 20 chapters. A quick glance at the auxiliary chapters, including the world map, magic beasts, spells, and power rankings, will show you the dedication I've poured into crafting this world. So, what does my story have to offer, and why should you read it? Phantoms are central to the plot, a mystery we'll unravel throughout the story. And unlike the typical trope of a main character leveling up, there's so much more in store. Expect a blend of action, adventure, fantasy, and mystery (and that's just the beginning). You can also look forward to romance and a harem (without crossing into ecchi territory). And once we wrap up Act 1 and Act 2 in the upcoming 100 chapters, brace yourself for mecha and futuristic magic tools. In conclusion, I'm striving to make this story as flexible as possible to unlock its full potential. With a bit of luck (and, of course, your support), I aim to turn it into a long-running series! If you have any questions, please feel free to ask in the comments below, and I'll happily respond (without giving away any spoilers). Thank you for considering my book, and I hope you enjoy the adventure ahead!

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