Review Detail of _Akiran_ in Pixel Pioneers: Forging Dreams in Real Time

I'll be honest. This is a fantastic book with great potential. It is a unique story! I think. The author's writing style is impressive and engaging, making it an enjoyable read. I would suggest that the author aims for more consistent chapter releases, preferably one per day (maybe two), to keep readers engaged. The world-building and character design are strong points of the book. However, there is room for improvement in character interactions, as the story sometimes feels more like a personal diary than a dynamic narrative. There is no Dialogue! I started to feel like he didn't talk at all in the story. Despite these minor issues, I appreciate the story and want to support the author in their writing journey. Good Luck!