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Me_personally2mthCommentedCh 36 Chapter 15 (Part 2)- Me_personally2mthReplied to Morg535
I hate when that happens
Ten minutes later - Me_personally2mthCommentedCh 21 Chapter 10 (Part 1)
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He's a master airbender in the avatar state and sum guy who is barely qualified as an airbender basically tied with him granted he learned from piandao but that hardly justifies a tie
Sokka, sitting next to her, also staring thoughtfully at Aang, had similar thoughts. He was still recovering from the blow and there would probably be a small scar on his face. But they didn't think about that; they didn't even need to discuss anything, they just thought about one thing. - Me_personally2mthCommented
Kinda sodas pointed with how weak the avatar felt this chapter. hopefully this is fixed later
Sokka, sitting next to her, also staring thoughtfully at Aang, had similar thoughts. He was still recovering from the blow and there would probably be a small scar on his face. But they didn't think about that; they didn't even need to discuss anything, they just thought about one thing. - Me_personally2mthReplied to Obligation
I think he might need to stop the double iploads to get better quality, dissapoinitng
"Hey, you poor guys, fire warriors on the ship, warrior women in the local jail," I gathered my strength to shout to my subordinates, "If I find out that someone has inappropriately touched the warrior women, I'll give her a weapon and put her in a one-on-one. Execute!" - Me_personally2mthCommented
Not how cleave works
A shrine appears behind me as I launch dozens of «Cleave» at Darkseid. All those attacks manage to do is bruise Darkseid all over his body, once again failing to even draw blood. - Me_personally2mthCommented
Even in fanfictions authors always nerf flash tsk tsk tsk
He then runs around the room, once in a while rushing at Darkseid to punch before retreating to safety and continuing the process. This works a few times before Darkseid figures out the pattern of the Flash's attacks and unleashes a counterattack, grabbing the Speedster by the throat before breaking both of his legs with his other hand and knocking him out with a punch. - Me_personally2mthReplied to crafty_me
Luck go berry speedrun lol ez gg l
???: Normally you would be on your own but since you died less than a minute into your new life, you will get the three wishes and one perk compensation package. - Me_personally2mthReplied to Shikdi_1
Ok, can you tell me why?
"You need a reason to fight?", Zerun questioned. Even in his past life, a battle was somewhere he truly felt alive, "To obtain power, to improve, and to measure that gained power in battle. It's something that brings me joy" - Me_personally2mthCommented
Engine room????????
"Follow me, I'll show you the engine room" - Me_personally2mthReplied to Jellyfish_Rogers
While this makes sense don't forget to show us these things it won't be as fun if you just tell us
"I love you too", Zerun teared up, "I'll love you, always" - Me_personally2mthReplied to Shikdi_1
Would've been better than whatever this was, kenpachi makes sense
"You need a reason to fight?", Zerun questioned. Even in his past life, a battle was somewhere he truly felt alive, "To obtain power, to improve, and to measure that gained power in battle. It's something that brings me joy" - Me_personally2mthCommented
Show don't tell
"Because my attacks weren't aimed to kill, or to overpower the boy" - Me_personally2mthCommented- What do you think? - answered the goddess with a question for a question.
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- Me_personally3mthCommented"Pat Willis, sir." Said a chubby fellow on my right with a full head of greying hair. "You've rid us of Stan Edgar and restored honesty, integrity and innovation to this corporation." He finished.
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Nice description it's probably not ever pointed out but this is what separates good from great, attention to detail
The air hung heavy with a mix of anxiety and hope, the scent of damp earth rising from the recent rain creating a distinct atmosphere. - Me_personally3mthCommented
Is the seone a boy or girl?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Me_personally3mthCommentedShe watched as the woman, who was barely five feet tall and whose body looked so frail that the slightest breeze could send her flying, laughed madly as she fired this terrible weapon at a humanoid target it was a living elf that had been captured and used as a test 'dummy'.