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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

only one chapter so this is purely based on writing quality and potential. good thing this has plenty of that, the language is a bit wordy but that feels like the MCs personality so it makes sense

oh first person

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Only two chapters so far so I can only realistically rate it based on he writing quality and potential well good thing because this has loads of both. An eloquently written bloodbath if there ever was such a thing

Justice for Mae fr fr. Author your appealing to my love of people getting what they deserve so consider me a reader from this second forth. Very well written

I am BLOWN AWAY by the sheer concept of this. (Get it cause the guy blows stuff up by farting. His power is literal flatulence, how and why can I not root for him to find any skulker he can, down a can of beans and let one rip in their faces)

Idk if this is you avoiding swearing or a typo love it regardless

Obligatory self 5 star rating. Thank you for even clicking on this, I make zero guarantees on grammar and punctuation but I assure you the creativity and love with bleed through with every single word you read here.

Antihero - MCVillain - Brother

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Pervs unite. Real quality that includes more degenerate themes for the fun of it bur doesn't rely on them for the quality. Great read so far

Demonic, horny, twisted horny and oh yeah horny. Great read for people who love raunchier infidelity based books

Well written and descriptive, main character develops quite nicely and it's a breezy pace keep up the good work

Shameless Author here thanks for even considering giving this a read. It's hard criticizing your own work so any and all feedback and support is appreciated