This book is totally worth it. I must say, I'm not even half way through but I'm hooked. I can't wait to continue. The only advise I have for guys out there, try it out right now.

Riveting! And as an apology for probably sounding pretentious, I'll tell you this story is amazing. I really hope it continues to keep on my toes. Its only nine chapters in, but so good. We need more material. Good job so far though author.

Oh, thanks I'll work on it at once

Hey. I rewrote the first chapter. Check it out and give me your thoughts. Hope it's better than the first version.

Interesting , is what I'd like to say, but thats an understatement. The novel has potential to be great, and the writing style is good, minimal grammatical errors. I can't wait to see how it progresses. Keep it up author.

Just the kind of story I was looking for. Thank you so much author. I really like the way they met. In truth, I've only read upto the fifth chapter, but I'd like to take my time with this.

Good beginning, good style, nice world building and I can't wait to see where this is going. Keep up the good work, author.

A dark vibe going on. But yeah, I really like your style. The first chapter was a bit long though. Normally those should have been two chapters, at least by webnovel standards. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Solid second chapter. Lets keep going.

I love the story. Not because I'm writing in a similar genre. Your style is solid and your plot captivating. Keep up the good work

Thank you for the feedback. Will do

A gripping story, really. So far I'm hooked on how the story is progressing. There were a few issues with some sentence patterns, but a little editing and you're golden.

I loved it from the beginning. There was already tension right from the prologue. Let's hope it just gets better

I like your dialogue style. Im a bit jealous of how easy it is to read your work, but yeah. Hopefully it just keeps getting better.