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SinaelDOverom

SinaelDOverom

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  • SinaelDOverom
    SinaelDOverom1mth
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    If the author indeed tried to emulate MTL style, then congratulations: their text is barely readable. Constant barrage of awkward phrasing and sentence composition, sentences that make absolutely no sense, using wrong words for the context, verbatim repeating words and phrases and so on. I have no idea how anyone would consider this a "decent writing".

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    The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart
    Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
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  • SinaelDOverom
    SinaelDOverom1yr
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    Quite confused by all the positive reviews. It's very obvious that the only thing Author knows about US they learned from action movies and memes. MC is said to be "Detective" and is given the "Super Detective System", but the author has no idea how police or detective work. MC is more of a "Killer, but somehow legal in this world weird cop system". There is no "Detective work" in the entire novel - the cases solve themselves, often accompanied by violence. MC kills indiscriminately, uses scavenged firearms taken freshly from corpses (big no-no) and so on. He would've been better established as a merc, not detective. The translation is sub par, the character are carboard cutouts and stereotypes, the names are often nonsensical etc. It's obvious that the story is not what is "written on the tin". Very disappointed.

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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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