Review Detail of SinaelDOverom in The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart

If the author indeed tried to emulate MTL style, then congratulations: their text is barely readable. Constant barrage of awkward phrasing and sentence composition, sentences that make absolutely no sense, using wrong words for the context, verbatim repeating words and phrases and so on. I have no idea how anyone would consider this a "decent writing".