I have read about 200 chapters of this fanfic and I love it. The way the the mc has had to claw his way up is a great change from op systems . While do enjoy those this is very refreshing. Warning very slow burn.

Good

Why are so good at this every story you write drags me in keep going

Pretty good story is interesting and thats all I have to say so !!aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasasaaaa!aaaaaaaasasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hours came and pasted Misspelled should be passed

Nick could finish this stuff in thirty minuets with him writing taking up majority of that time Change him to his Add a between up and majority

Mispelled smile instead you put small

I like fanfics they can show you many different sides they think a chracter has but no matter how interesting the idea . You need legible sentence structure ask someone to help edit instead of using google translate.I can accept some bad grammer, but not the whole thing mate still I hope you improvre and come back for a rewrite good luck on your journy.

This is one of the best mha ff ever written I am stunned and in awe this should have been the main timline just wow. One critique is the miss spells of a few words but otherwise perfect.

Honestly it's a good fan fiction I am loving the way it is progressing but if he wanted a good partner he should grab conners while he is vulnrable in order to mold him he has a brilliant mind and at least some connections and if go about it without reaveling his identity the perfect fall guy