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THROUGH- OUT HEAVEN AND EARTH... ...I ALONE AM THE HONORED ONE.
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I am using a translator First of all I really like your story and the rapid growth of the MC's power and how you write the way that his power increases rapidly but please make the MC investigate well the things that are related to the supernatural and also don't make it late a lot in making him realize that he is the only person with a system and also thank you very much for making the mc's personality incompatible with the fact of having to join a faction. I just hope that the mc remains independent and if he works for a faction be something like a mercenary please don't make the mc join a faction for the sister or something like that I beg you.
a lot of text and I'm using a translator. I hope the author reads my comment and takes it into account to increase the power of the protagonist. Hey, really, domain expansion is claiming a part of the world as yours temporarily and basically giving a boost to the sorcerer's technique and when the domain ends, the sorcerer's technique is put on cooldown, it couldn't be created as a boost for the cursed technique. as if a domain expansion had been activated without having created a domain increasing the power of the cursed technique or being able to use ranged abilities that would normally require physical contact such as mahito's transfiguration at a distance and doing this over time and experienced returning this boosting something permanent wouldn't be ridiculously op
And I also only hope that what happens is that you write the point of view of the sorcerers and the curses after the enormous attack that the protagonist made. I would like to see their reactions to the unexpected attack and the loss of companions.
I am using a translator I just hope that the protagonist gets Sukuna's fingers if Yuji dies because with the protagonist's cursed technique I don't doubt that he could dominate the fragments of Sukuna's soul if they are separated to be able to obtain his cursed technique and knowledge of the cursed energy. It is very risky but if you achieve it, the benefits and increase in power you would obtain would be enormous.
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resident evil 4
(sorry if it is not understood, use the translator and also sorry for so much text) I just hope that with the high intelligence that the MC has and the system that he builds things that have the style of our world and not those of Fallout, those of Fallout are beautiful and iconic but honestly that things look like a combination of 80's or 70's I'm not sure of the year accurately and futuristic I don't like it I prefer the aesthetics of everyday life things in our more comfortable world like a laptop the one from Fallout is fine but if you had one in real life a computer that is so slow and little would be horrible functional compared to ours and the screen is green or another color, all the fallout technology is great and everything but I would say what you need to do the mc is to give an improvement to the electronic components or I don't know what could be improved I don't know about the components electrical and computers and give it more of the touch of our time instead of the characteristic Fallout style and after you meet those from the institute who combine them or those of our time win.
Excuse me, use Google Translate because I wanted to leave a message about the story. I just hope that in the future Akira takes off the evil piece and leaves Rias's nobility and gets rid of the devil part I have nothing against Rias but the devils show by how they treat the reincarnated devils that they are a race that if it weren't by the maous it would already be exterminated by all the other factions
Usen el traductor si no me entienden no es mi problema ⚠️⚠️⚠️ precaución mucho texto Bueno es la parte del NTR estuvo un poco fuerte pero quedo genial que dejara completamente a la mujer y demuestra lo que es ser una buena persona aunque quedó como uno malo cuando golpeó al otro tipo eso pueden decir todo lo que quieran pero de que fue malo fue malo y lo de la chica no le hizo nada y la dejo en su casa eso fue un poco anti climático pero se entiendo los sentimientos no desaparece de inmediato con solo ordenarles que desaparezcan eso no es realista si la dejo de amar y no lloro por ella pero no desapareció por completo su preocupación por qué la fue a dejar a su casa por precaución por su seguridad y eso es lo que hace una persona buena quitando el hecho de golpear al otro tipo y si simplemente la dejaba o la ayudaba los 2 lados estaban bien cualquier puede elegir lo que quiera es su elección una que lo pone en una que no afectaría nuestra forma de ver al mc demuestra que por ella aún por lo que le hizo demuestra que no se rebajará a su nivel y ni será cruel aunque nadie lo culparia por serlo que de hecho algunos lo felicitarian por serlo pero la decisión desde mi perspectiva lo vuelve un mejor persona que esa puta pero ignorando todo esa parte de la historia me gusta que el prota se algo denso después de todo no es que los hombres en la vida capten todas la indirectas de la mujeres eso es una rareza a todos en algún momento se les escapara alguna digan lo que digan algo se les escapara y en alguien momento en el futuro dirán mierda se me pasó esa indirecta y desde una perspectiva externa es fácil pero cuando está en esa situación es una historia completamente diferente se que al autor no le gusta los personajes denso pero sin duda el de este personaje le queda bien y me gustó y me está gustando como está quedando la historia